for Rain12/21/2003 c1 
6Lamia Aduro
hm...didn't like this one...sry! just being honest thought it was simple (which is good), but it was stating facts too much. it would've been better if u described rain as different things, without saying rain. is this good constructive criticism? hey,but its good for a first poem posted, hehe...later.
6Lamia Adurohm...didn't like this one...sry! just being honest thought it was simple (which is good), but it was stating facts too much. it would've been better if u described rain as different things, without saying rain. is this good constructive criticism? hey,but its good for a first poem posted, hehe...later.