Just In
for Long Lived Magic

10/3/2006 c1 43Punk'N'Rock Chick
10/18/2003 c1 JessE
It really won't be fair to critique this poem because it would be based on feeling not fact. I don't like magic and sort so it really wasn't appealing to me.

Maybe if u were vivid about the fighting and gore and HAHAHAHA *cough* yea it would be a nice poem to read to lil chidren so it doesn't scare their pants off, but for someone a bit older, the poem needed more action (and gore!). Yes, more action.

*wink* i'm a fan, though :off to read more:
6/5/2003 c1 19Crow08
Great poem! I like the way it flowed, and the way that you rhymed words. Keep writing!
6/5/2003 c1 73Exiled-Knight
very nice poem. It flowed really well. Keep Writing

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