
6/13/2003 c13 lindsay scissorhands
OMG! yay i liked the ending so much! that whole story was awesome, you have a great way of writing. it was totally awesome in the end! do you think you could review some of my other ones? i need someone w/ your good writing-ness (that was random) to help me w/ just the structure of the stories. other name is LiNdSaY.AP, thanks!
OMG! yay i liked the ending so much! that whole story was awesome, you have a great way of writing. it was totally awesome in the end! do you think you could review some of my other ones? i need someone w/ your good writing-ness (that was random) to help me w/ just the structure of the stories. other name is LiNdSaY.AP, thanks!
6/13/2003 c11 lindsay
thank you so much for telling me you updated! and thank you for reading alterations! keep this one up, must-read-more!
thank you so much for telling me you updated! and thank you for reading alterations! keep this one up, must-read-more!
6/12/2003 c13
3monadoll
ooh-la-laa! mrs. taylor! lol...the epilogue was very cool! seriously. i'm smiling even as i'm writing this. too bad that the story ended, but at least we had a good time reading this, that's the most important. ok, bybye
monadoll

ooh-la-laa! mrs. taylor! lol...the epilogue was very cool! seriously. i'm smiling even as i'm writing this. too bad that the story ended, but at least we had a good time reading this, that's the most important. ok, bybye
monadoll
6/11/2003 c7 beautifuletdown
I don't like Dandridge. At first Lara seemed so cold and distant but i like her now. Another story with london in it. . .i really want to go there! What was Lara doing with Dandridge? I'll definitely find time to read more.
I don't like Dandridge. At first Lara seemed so cold and distant but i like her now. Another story with london in it. . .i really want to go there! What was Lara doing with Dandridge? I'll definitely find time to read more.
6/11/2003 c13
4luckynumba7
cute cute cute! I loved how you ended it! good job. thanks for reading my story and a couple of reviews!
love,
luckynumba7

cute cute cute! I loved how you ended it! good job. thanks for reading my story and a couple of reviews!
love,
luckynumba7
6/11/2003 c12 luckynumba7
that was cute. I liked it. Make it a happy ending please? For me? *makes puppy dog faces* pretty pretty please :D update soon
love,
luckynumba7
that was cute. I liked it. Make it a happy ending please? For me? *makes puppy dog faces* pretty pretty please :D update soon
love,
luckynumba7
6/11/2003 c2
4ladyglaze
Hey I was gonna ask you.. if you like my writing as good as I like yours, how would you feel about writing a story together? Emaile me or let me know..

Hey I was gonna ask you.. if you like my writing as good as I like yours, how would you feel about writing a story together? Emaile me or let me know..
6/11/2003 c1 ladyglaze
wow, very good writing.. I dont have time to read more but.. very good fiction.. keep it up..
wow, very good writing.. I dont have time to read more but.. very good fiction.. keep it up..
6/11/2003 c12 JazzeeT
what do you mean it will be the last and that you do not know if it will be a happy or sad ending. Waht, sniffle sniffle... im gonna be a little afarid to read it then. *sigh*
Nice chapter i like how you made more couply and sissy john is Lara's john so i like him all the same but you must have a happy ending. * i got candy and a million bucks with your name on it*
what do you mean it will be the last and that you do not know if it will be a happy or sad ending. Waht, sniffle sniffle... im gonna be a little afarid to read it then. *sigh*
Nice chapter i like how you made more couply and sissy john is Lara's john so i like him all the same but you must have a happy ending. * i got candy and a million bucks with your name on it*
6/11/2003 c11
3monadoll
lalalla! chapter 10 was really good..all of it is good..
sorry for not reviewing lately, i couldn't get on the internet for about 3 days *it was a real pain in the arse..lol..* anyway, i have seriously no idea how to get him look less sissy..in ch 11 he turned back to that situation, while before he almost looked like normal..lol..ok..bybye
monadoll

lalalla! chapter 10 was really good..all of it is good..
sorry for not reviewing lately, i couldn't get on the internet for about 3 days *it was a real pain in the arse..lol..* anyway, i have seriously no idea how to get him look less sissy..in ch 11 he turned back to that situation, while before he almost looked like normal..lol..ok..bybye
monadoll
6/10/2003 c10
4luckynumba7
i like it! John finally quit being a dork and told her. And it was a good thing Lara asked him what went wrong or else things might've never been fixed! I love your story!
love,
luckynumba7

i like it! John finally quit being a dork and told her. And it was a good thing Lara asked him what went wrong or else things might've never been fixed! I love your story!
love,
luckynumba7
6/10/2003 c10
10LPScissorhands
damn. that was so good! do you plan on writing more? if so, update me or let me know if you've written anything else!

damn. that was so good! do you plan on writing more? if so, update me or let me know if you've written anything else!