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6/13/2003 c13 lindsay scissorhands
OMG! yay i liked the ending so much! that whole story was awesome, you have a great way of writing. it was totally awesome in the end! do you think you could review some of my other ones? i need someone w/ your good writing-ness (that was random) to help me w/ just the structure of the stories. other name is LiNdSaY.AP, thanks!
6/13/2003 c11 lindsay
thank you so much for telling me you updated! and thank you for reading alterations! keep this one up, must-read-more!
6/12/2003 c13 3monadoll
ooh-la-laa! mrs. taylor! lol...the epilogue was very cool! seriously. i'm smiling even as i'm writing this. too bad that the story ended, but at least we had a good time reading this, that's the most important. ok, bybye

monadoll
6/11/2003 c13 JazzeeT
uh. that was so sweet of you to add the epilogue. i will def miss this story.
6/11/2003 c7 beautifuletdown
I don't like Dandridge. At first Lara seemed so cold and distant but i like her now. Another story with london in it. . .i really want to go there! What was Lara doing with Dandridge? I'll definitely find time to read more.
6/11/2003 c13 4luckynumba7
cute cute cute! I loved how you ended it! good job. thanks for reading my story and a couple of reviews!

love,

luckynumba7
6/11/2003 c12 luckynumba7
that was cute. I liked it. Make it a happy ending please? For me? *makes puppy dog faces* pretty pretty please :D update soon

love,

luckynumba7
6/11/2003 c3 beautifuletdown
Great so far, and oh the UK!
6/11/2003 c2 4ladyglaze
Hey I was gonna ask you.. if you like my writing as good as I like yours, how would you feel about writing a story together? Emaile me or let me know..
6/11/2003 c1 ladyglaze
wow, very good writing.. I dont have time to read more but.. very good fiction.. keep it up..
6/11/2003 c12 JazzeeT
what do you mean it will be the last and that you do not know if it will be a happy or sad ending. Waht, sniffle sniffle... im gonna be a little afarid to read it then. *sigh*

Nice chapter i like how you made more couply and sissy john is Lara's john so i like him all the same but you must have a happy ending. * i got candy and a million bucks with your name on it*
6/11/2003 c11 Baby Milo
That was one of the best chapters! Continue continue continue!
6/11/2003 c11 3monadoll
lalalla! chapter 10 was really good..all of it is good..

sorry for not reviewing lately, i couldn't get on the internet for about 3 days *it was a real pain in the arse..lol..* anyway, i have seriously no idea how to get him look less sissy..in ch 11 he turned back to that situation, while before he almost looked like normal..lol..ok..bybye

monadoll
6/10/2003 c10 4luckynumba7
i like it! John finally quit being a dork and told her. And it was a good thing Lara asked him what went wrong or else things might've never been fixed! I love your story!

love,

luckynumba7
6/10/2003 c10 10LPScissorhands
damn. that was so good! do you plan on writing more? if so, update me or let me know if you've written anything else!
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