for Digital Dreamers6/13/2003 c1 
13StarlightWarrior
Cool story. Well written, gripping, and a very interesting beginning- you must write more!
13StarlightWarriorCool story. Well written, gripping, and a very interesting beginning- you must write more!
6/7/2003 c1 1solocommand
An interesting idea for a story, definately a good start. I look forward to reading more?
1solocommandAn interesting idea for a story, definately a good start. I look forward to reading more?
6/5/2003 c1 2Aryaveiel Skycryer
A very interesting premise for the story. The mechanics kind of suggested that English is your second language, despite the good use of it. Sorry if it isn't; it probably just needs a little revision.
2Aryaveiel SkycryerA very interesting premise for the story. The mechanics kind of suggested that English is your second language, despite the good use of it. Sorry if it isn't; it probably just needs a little revision.