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6/5/2003 c1 Angele Raye
This poem had a nice feel about it. I loved the "life" references. The wrinkles, the bread. That's what makes me love it. Best Wishes!
6/5/2003 c1 319ALK214
Ah, very nice, but soley because of your descriptions. I know how hard adjective-related poetry is to do, so I have to congradulate you on that. The rhythm was off, but that wasn't a big deal; for some reason, the mistune didn't really offcast the essence of the poem. Good job!

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