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6/5/2003 c1 36phish2phish
dude i love those lines "a mad dance: thats all life is" very very good poem, kudos! check out mine if you get a chance, thanks

phish2phish
6/5/2003 c1 319ALK214
I liked this poem very much, but it definitely lacked in flow. I was anticipating a rhyme on every other line, maybe like and ABAB pattern, but no... Disappointing in that area, but otherwise it was great.

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