for my parallel SELF11/9/2005 c1 
34Smoky Bear
i am in touch with my parallel self, lol, her name is Sally, she's much nicer than i am...
fantastic poem. i love the way it questions existence on a base level
34Smoky Beari am in touch with my parallel self, lol, her name is Sally, she's much nicer than i am...
fantastic poem. i love the way it questions existence on a base level
11/26/2004 c1 9Coeur Mysterieux
That was really cool! I enjoy you style of writing! It is something that feels so different! Keep writin'!
Luv ya, doll!~Kiersten
9Coeur MysterieuxThat was really cool! I enjoy you style of writing! It is something that feels so different! Keep writin'!
Luv ya, doll!~Kiersten
12/18/2003 c1 Cuba
This is very cool and original, one of the most intelligent things I've read on this site. Love it! Lines 'transgressed my ruined farce of life' and 'do any of us believe they exist' are unexprectedly cynical in context. Much enjoyed. Cheers!
This is very cool and original, one of the most intelligent things I've read on this site. Love it! Lines 'transgressed my ruined farce of life' and 'do any of us believe they exist' are unexprectedly cynical in context. Much enjoyed. Cheers!
6/11/2003 c1 Kiayla
Weird... *shudders* Now I'm going to be talking to 'myself' forever... I really liked it! It really gives me something to think about (you don't know how hard it is to find things like this these days. Wel... maybe you do. Oh, never mind...)
~*~Kiayla~*~
PS Thanks for reviewing me! ^^
Weird... *shudders* Now I'm going to be talking to 'myself' forever... I really liked it! It really gives me something to think about (you don't know how hard it is to find things like this these days. Wel... maybe you do. Oh, never mind...)
~*~Kiayla~*~
PS Thanks for reviewing me! ^^
6/9/2003 c1 9Severine O
Wow... I am near speechless. Your poem is something that I would like myself to write myself but can't. It's amazing... wow.
9Severine OWow... I am near speechless. Your poem is something that I would like myself to write myself but can't. It's amazing... wow.