11/27/2003 c1 60To-Speak
pretty... so deep...
'Give the heavens our names' really brings the whole poem together and at the end ('And someday we will join you') is a wonderful closing line. the last line also gives the reader something to think about
good job, i really liked this
keep up the good work
pretty... so deep...
'Give the heavens our names' really brings the whole poem together and at the end ('And someday we will join you') is a wonderful closing line. the last line also gives the reader something to think about
good job, i really liked this
keep up the good work
6/10/2003 c1 34Smoky Bear
landed in your mind while you were sleeping- i like that
like the poem to... deep. nice job
landed in your mind while you were sleeping- i like that
like the poem to... deep. nice job
6/5/2003 c1 Angele Raye
"Give the heavens our names" is such an inspirational thought. It boggles the mind. This is very profound. I loved it! Best Wishes!
"Give the heavens our names" is such an inspirational thought. It boggles the mind. This is very profound. I loved it! Best Wishes!