for sometimes i think its ALIVE12/18/2003 c1 Cuba
Yay for unrequited love indeed! Respect. This poem is excellent. The last three lines utterly rock.
Yay for unrequited love indeed! Respect. This poem is excellent. The last three lines utterly rock.
11/20/2003 c1 
26peachpenguin
"lonely moments of wrenching compassion"
i love that line! amazing poem.
26peachpenguin"lonely moments of wrenching compassion"
i love that line! amazing poem.
11/20/2003 c1 6Windy Mountain
wow. that was good! it seemed very grown up word usage. some words i didn't understand, but that's ok! because i still understood the "soul" of the poem..at least, the feeling of it.
good job!
Keep Writing!:)
CaitlinSerene
p.s.-thanks for reviewing my poem!
6Windy Mountainwow. that was good! it seemed very grown up word usage. some words i didn't understand, but that's ok! because i still understood the "soul" of the poem..at least, the feeling of it.
good job!
Keep Writing!:)
CaitlinSerene
p.s.-thanks for reviewing my poem!
7/8/2003 c1 53Jupiter's Tears
Wow...powerful poem! I've known this feeling so I can definitely relate...This is really well writen.
Thanks for reviewing one of my poems!
Peace,
Tears
53Jupiter's TearsWow...powerful poem! I've known this feeling so I can definitely relate...This is really well writen.
Thanks for reviewing one of my poems!
Peace,
Tears
7/7/2003 c1 FlawedMarble
This is slightly confusing...but it's very beautiful. And yay for your positive attitude (and the title didn't work properly on my poem...you're not allowed to swear, it seems). It's an excellent poem, although a little hard to follow.
This is slightly confusing...but it's very beautiful. And yay for your positive attitude (and the title didn't work properly on my poem...you're not allowed to swear, it seems). It's an excellent poem, although a little hard to follow.
6/26/2003 c1 126lili brik
ahh...feelings that i am painfully familiar with. excellent poems, and thanks much for the reviews.
126lili brikahh...feelings that i am painfully familiar with. excellent poems, and thanks much for the reviews.
6/25/2003 c1 62BloodBrother
Just when I thought I had seen all the poems on love, you pull a new one. I love the change of flow in different points, mostly because it works pretty well.
love of the universe
that it must keep hidden
from those upon whom it would bestow itself
and I, I must distance myself from my love
lest the vultures of the earth descend
make my life into the ultimate hell
as yet I am free in that aspect
not admitted to loving
These are some great lines right here. I also especially love the end of this one. Excellent poem.
62BloodBrotherJust when I thought I had seen all the poems on love, you pull a new one. I love the change of flow in different points, mostly because it works pretty well.
love of the universe
that it must keep hidden
from those upon whom it would bestow itself
and I, I must distance myself from my love
lest the vultures of the earth descend
make my life into the ultimate hell
as yet I am free in that aspect
not admitted to loving
These are some great lines right here. I also especially love the end of this one. Excellent poem.