for another yesterday for the future1/29/2004 c1 
43James Rain
Isn't poetic lisence wonderful. I loved the format for this piece, it specifically inhanced the visual aspect of reading. I also liked the way you wrote "us" as "u.s." Also, the last line was a perfect vehicle for cynicism.
43James RainIsn't poetic lisence wonderful. I loved the format for this piece, it specifically inhanced the visual aspect of reading. I also liked the way you wrote "us" as "u.s." Also, the last line was a perfect vehicle for cynicism.