for A Simple Wish2/13/2004 c1 CM12345
Wow... This is a really powerful piece. I almost cried when I read it, it's so beautiful. I especially enjoyed the second and third stanzas. Puts my poetry to shame ^.~ You've got a lot of talent! EXCELLENT work!
Wow... This is a really powerful piece. I almost cried when I read it, it's so beautiful. I especially enjoyed the second and third stanzas. Puts my poetry to shame ^.~ You've got a lot of talent! EXCELLENT work!
10/22/2003 c1 
2Star-Gir1
Wow...excellent, excellent poem! :) You are a very talented writer. Dreams are truly life. Your rhythm in the poem was excellent, and you described dreams and hopes beautifully. Keep on writing, and God bless! ^_^
By the way, I will definatly put this poem as one of my favorites! Again, keep it up!
2Star-Gir1Wow...excellent, excellent poem! :) You are a very talented writer. Dreams are truly life. Your rhythm in the poem was excellent, and you described dreams and hopes beautifully. Keep on writing, and God bless! ^_^
By the way, I will definatly put this poem as one of my favorites! Again, keep it up!
6/7/2003 c1 36Psycho-kyugurl
The ryhming is perfect, I really can't put them into words. It's magnificient!
::Add on to fav. list::
36Psycho-kyugurlThe ryhming is perfect, I really can't put them into words. It's magnificient!
::Add on to fav. list::
6/6/2003 c1 Needa S
I applaud ya this is soo beautiful.. I hope I have room left to add it to my fav's list. Outstanding piece of art.
I applaud ya this is soo beautiful.. I hope I have room left to add it to my fav's list. Outstanding piece of art.
6/6/2003 c1 Anonymous
I thought it was one of the best I've read, I mean how many people can rhyme in a poem like that. It was beautiful.
I thought it was one of the best I've read, I mean how many people can rhyme in a poem like that. It was beautiful.