
8/14/2012 c1
3CurryBunChan
awww i really wanna know whats in that warehouseD: really suspensful though, had fun reading it

awww i really wanna know whats in that warehouseD: really suspensful though, had fun reading it
1/5/2008 c1 Diane
Very creepy and imaginative
Very creepy and imaginative
10/17/2003 c1
158outruntheavalanche
I love your original ideas :)
I wanna know what's in the wharehouse now! *pout*

I love your original ideas :)
I wanna know what's in the wharehouse now! *pout*
6/20/2003 c1
9Chihuahua
Whoa!
Now this was really cool!
Yep, it definitely did it's share of creeping (no pun intended) for me...
Somehow the image of 'Thing' from the Addam's Family comes to mind.
Very well written short one... keep writing.

Whoa!
Now this was really cool!
Yep, it definitely did it's share of creeping (no pun intended) for me...
Somehow the image of 'Thing' from the Addam's Family comes to mind.
Very well written short one... keep writing.
6/11/2003 c1
1Ronan
What the hell? Wierd, sounds like you were high or something. May be it was the MacDonalds, they do leave the food there for hours staight! God knows what the hell happens to it!
EOL

What the hell? Wierd, sounds like you were high or something. May be it was the MacDonalds, they do leave the food there for hours staight! God knows what the hell happens to it!
EOL
6/10/2003 c1 tawny1
Whoa...creepy and awesome! I like it! But what in the world happened to you at the mcdonalds? Freaky! !~tawny
Whoa...creepy and awesome! I like it! But what in the world happened to you at the mcdonalds? Freaky! !~tawny
6/9/2003 c1
7Ron R
Excellent Story! Amazing how a simple idea like a hand can be turned into a nice suspenseful story. Although it's sort of a cliffhanger ending, and I would like to find out more about this hand, I'm not sure it's a sequal type of story. However, I do know it's a great type of story.

Excellent Story! Amazing how a simple idea like a hand can be turned into a nice suspenseful story. Although it's sort of a cliffhanger ending, and I would like to find out more about this hand, I'm not sure it's a sequal type of story. However, I do know it's a great type of story.
6/6/2003 c1 Strega Brava
I have goosebumps the size of watermelons. That was a spooky story! Good Halloween reading.
I have goosebumps the size of watermelons. That was a spooky story! Good Halloween reading.