
1/2/2004 c1
124Tipped
besides the swearing, this is a very good poem. I luv to know your secret for success... ( imagine the cutest little face possible begging you,- with puppy eyes and a lower lip quivering) you don't need to swear in your writing, it's so beautiful!
~missy~

besides the swearing, this is a very good poem. I luv to know your secret for success... ( imagine the cutest little face possible begging you,- with puppy eyes and a lower lip quivering) you don't need to swear in your writing, it's so beautiful!
~missy~
12/14/2003 c1
131Nizzles
Amazing. Very powerful and emotional, I love it. This blows my junk out of the water, keep writing.
~Thanks for the review on "I am Fear", also.

Amazing. Very powerful and emotional, I love it. This blows my junk out of the water, keep writing.
~Thanks for the review on "I am Fear", also.
6/6/2003 c1
45Tom O'Hare
Wonderful! I really liked the mystery in your poem and the way it flowed. You obviously have a way with words!
~tom

Wonderful! I really liked the mystery in your poem and the way it flowed. You obviously have a way with words!
~tom