for words wreathed in smoke, or waste number 2836/30/2003 c1 Cuba
Wow, like, bleak, man. The last stanza is mind-blowingly appropriate to far too many people, I think. Much respect, you have major talent.
Wow, like, bleak, man. The last stanza is mind-blowingly appropriate to far too many people, I think. Much respect, you have major talent.
6/9/2003 c1 
29Ala
Wow...this hits very close to home.
I hate reviewing (it makes me absolutely nervous) but I really love this, especially the third-to-last and last stanzas.
"hazy dreams I never tried to block"
So true.
29AlaWow...this hits very close to home.
I hate reviewing (it makes me absolutely nervous) but I really love this, especially the third-to-last and last stanzas.
"hazy dreams I never tried to block"
So true.
6/9/2003 c1 56Stormbringer
Hey, Hey! Thanks for reviewing my poems. This is really good actually. You kinda lure people in with your lower caps. And when they expect to find something bad, (not saying yours is) You blow them away with something so good. I really like it ^_^
56StormbringerHey, Hey! Thanks for reviewing my poems. This is really good actually. You kinda lure people in with your lower caps. And when they expect to find something bad, (not saying yours is) You blow them away with something so good. I really like it ^_^