for Faerie Wars Book 1: 'War Of Techi'7/19/2004 c6 Xerro
A guy pays you a compliment, he says your pretty and you kill him. Remind me to be careful with what i say around you.
It's been a while, the chapter was short yes, but it's still as good as ever, i hope you update soon.
A guy pays you a compliment, he says your pretty and you kill him. Remind me to be careful with what i say around you.
It's been a while, the chapter was short yes, but it's still as good as ever, i hope you update soon.
4/16/2004 c5 Xerro
i had lost hope of you updateing this but your back so i once again have to put this on my favourites list. I hope you update soon cos i want to see what their powers are!
i had lost hope of you updateing this but your back so i once again have to put this on my favourites list. I hope you update soon cos i want to see what their powers are!
4/5/2004 c4 
2Katanassasin
Good job! I now dub you...the cliffie queen! I have an idea that you cuold use if you want: how 'bout you make Koneko find out that Tanto's a pixie scout too?
2KatanassasinGood job! I now dub you...the cliffie queen! I have an idea that you cuold use if you want: how 'bout you make Koneko find out that Tanto's a pixie scout too?
3/29/2004 c4 Xerro
The story certainly has a unique storyline so far, and is quite interesting, so i've added you to my author alert list. However i'm sure the story is missing something, i'm not sure what but i just feel it is. You maybe going through each scene a bit to quickly, or that just might be me. Anyway i'll continue to read and review your story, and later if it impresses me i'll added it to my favourites list.
The story certainly has a unique storyline so far, and is quite interesting, so i've added you to my author alert list. However i'm sure the story is missing something, i'm not sure what but i just feel it is. You maybe going through each scene a bit to quickly, or that just might be me. Anyway i'll continue to read and review your story, and later if it impresses me i'll added it to my favourites list.
2/18/2004 c1 9Lunar Wulf Gemini
Cool... (grins). I'll read more of this later... It seems pretty cool so far.
9Lunar Wulf GeminiCool... (grins). I'll read more of this later... It seems pretty cool so far.
12/16/2003 c4 1Corean4life
OMG SO AWSOME. YOu are truly a awsome writer. Your descriptions and such were awsome. I love the idea of spells and such. Hey just and idea, I think you should add like a different symbol for each person later on. Like Techi Nyou being a star power or sumthin. Then have a wizard or magition to help them along the way (hint: named JOE or joseph) MAke him there guid through the way. OOH then have a next generation of faerie fighters. Have them be all boys next. They all have magic powers. And have like one rebel and turn evil and oohh so much ideas to write down. If you want to write next stuff together my email is () again awsome story. PLZ continue
1Corean4lifeOMG SO AWSOME. YOu are truly a awsome writer. Your descriptions and such were awsome. I love the idea of spells and such. Hey just and idea, I think you should add like a different symbol for each person later on. Like Techi Nyou being a star power or sumthin. Then have a wizard or magition to help them along the way (hint: named JOE or joseph) MAke him there guid through the way. OOH then have a next generation of faerie fighters. Have them be all boys next. They all have magic powers. And have like one rebel and turn evil and oohh so much ideas to write down. If you want to write next stuff together my email is () again awsome story. PLZ continue
6/9/2003 c3 7Destin
Sorry I had to review again. I love the cliff hanger, and don't. First I love the cliff hanger cause it shows you can put suspense in your story. WHAT IS EXCELLENT ! Second I don't cause I want to know what fairie world is like !This is so cool ! O and yes Tanto is sweet, I bet he has a crush on Koneko. Update soon! Sorry I keep reviewing I know somepeople get annoyed by so much reviews by one person, but I just have to say something every chapter. I like this story alot ! PLease update to chapter 4 soon!
-Destin Scar
7DestinSorry I had to review again. I love the cliff hanger, and don't. First I love the cliff hanger cause it shows you can put suspense in your story. WHAT IS EXCELLENT ! Second I don't cause I want to know what fairie world is like !This is so cool ! O and yes Tanto is sweet, I bet he has a crush on Koneko. Update soon! Sorry I keep reviewing I know somepeople get annoyed by so much reviews by one person, but I just have to say something every chapter. I like this story alot ! PLease update to chapter 4 soon!
-Destin Scar
6/8/2003 c2 Destin
More action ! I loved it ! PLease update soon! I can't wait to see how they stop or fight this war, and how there goin to do it. This is so cool. I loved the action in this chapter. UPdate soon!
-Destin Scar
More action ! I loved it ! PLease update soon! I can't wait to see how they stop or fight this war, and how there goin to do it. This is so cool. I loved the action in this chapter. UPdate soon!
-Destin Scar
6/7/2003 c1 Kyla's BoyfriendCameron
It was great! Absolutely thrilling! Made me want to jump out of my seat and eat a donut!
It was great! Absolutely thrilling! Made me want to jump out of my seat and eat a donut!
6/7/2003 c1 Destin
OMG this is one great story ! I mean it ! I love the ideas of Fairy fighters! I like how it's a little of sailor moon with the transformations , but not alot like sailor moon so it makes it oringal ^_^ I love the action in the beginning you really know how to bring in the reader. I can't believe how good it was. O and a question o two questions . First what's the narrtors name I know she transforms to Tenchi Nyou but what's her human name ? But that doesn't at all ruin the story, it was just a thing I was thinking. O and if you can , can you please read one of my stories? Update soon ! Please update !
-Destin Scar
OMG this is one great story ! I mean it ! I love the ideas of Fairy fighters! I like how it's a little of sailor moon with the transformations , but not alot like sailor moon so it makes it oringal ^_^ I love the action in the beginning you really know how to bring in the reader. I can't believe how good it was. O and a question o two questions . First what's the narrtors name I know she transforms to Tenchi Nyou but what's her human name ? But that doesn't at all ruin the story, it was just a thing I was thinking. O and if you can , can you please read one of my stories? Update soon ! Please update !
-Destin Scar
6/6/2003 c1 Rachel
IT's cool. I like faeries so this is gonna be fun to read!
IT's cool. I like faeries so this is gonna be fun to read!