for The Middle Corner3/19/2004 c1 
7ku
yeah. even when you're with someone, you're not really with them. and so really, we're all alone.
7kuyeah. even when you're with someone, you're not really with them. and so really, we're all alone.
2/15/2004 c1 110CL Caudle
I liked the rather original rhyme scheme. I also liked the emotion apparent in it, the sense of being forgotten. My one complaint would be the somtimes changing rhythm, but other than that it's wonderful.
110CL CaudleI liked the rather original rhyme scheme. I also liked the emotion apparent in it, the sense of being forgotten. My one complaint would be the somtimes changing rhythm, but other than that it's wonderful.
2/15/2004 c1 Spooni
I really liked your idea here. Stuck in a place that shouldn't exist, thus the middle corner.. I aslo like how your rhyming was not as contrived as most I see and your rhythm was constant and made sense. Nice. ^_^
I really liked your idea here. Stuck in a place that shouldn't exist, thus the middle corner.. I aslo like how your rhyming was not as contrived as most I see and your rhythm was constant and made sense. Nice. ^_^