
3/6/2004 c1
30Xx-RazorbladeKiss-xX
Wow! Nicely done! I like how this poem rhymes at times but isnt strictly formatted, it really keeps the reader hooked as opposed to getting distracted...Anyway, Nice Job!

Wow! Nicely done! I like how this poem rhymes at times but isnt strictly formatted, it really keeps the reader hooked as opposed to getting distracted...Anyway, Nice Job!
2/15/2004 c1
48Laineniel
wow. That's really cool! i like the rhythm and how it goes with the wandering through the maze . Way to go. (and thanks for reviewing "Greek")
~Arwen

wow. That's really cool! i like the rhythm and how it goes with the wandering through the maze . Way to go. (and thanks for reviewing "Greek")
~Arwen
2/15/2004 c1 Spooni
Whoot...! Sounds like a very evil purgatory...or perhaps someone going insane. But I like it. Nice imagery. I also liked you freer composition in this one..less structure..less rhyme. Again, nice.
Whoot...! Sounds like a very evil purgatory...or perhaps someone going insane. But I like it. Nice imagery. I also liked you freer composition in this one..less structure..less rhyme. Again, nice.
6/9/2003 c1 Valerie
hah, I found you. That was a really good poem. And it rhymed.
hah, I found you. That was a really good poem. And it rhymed.