4/19/2004 c1 68Elizabeth Candle
::tear:: Very touching. I love it. Great job.

2/18/2004 c1 38Always Writing
A very nice, short poem.
You conveyed her feelings very well, (hehe, I should know, I've been there myself).
Another great piece.
-Carrie

2/15/2004 c1 Leigh Nithra
definitely know what that feels like...great way of showing emotions, with the repetition

2/14/2004 c1 Dominic
I like this. You did an excellent job using simplicity to express complex emotions. You didn't hide behind big words and lengthy lines. It feels honest. Keep it up.

8/5/2003 c1 40TK Styles
Short and to the point. I like it and sadly too many relationships follow this path nowadays. Keep up the good work. Peace.