for A Conspiring Universe8/4/2003 c3 Mbwun
Well, I was rather wondering about the Japanese grill aliens...:) Looking forward to the answers to my questions, so keep it up, man.
~He Who Walks On Al Fours
PS - And never forget that they're called graphic novels. Comic books are for kids.:)
Well, I was rather wondering about the Japanese grill aliens...:) Looking forward to the answers to my questions, so keep it up, man.
~He Who Walks On Al Fours
PS - And never forget that they're called graphic novels. Comic books are for kids.:)
8/3/2003 c3 
1Tom Draeger
Very good, I'd love to read more. You're use of language is very well done and it's pretty descriptive. Keep up the good work!
1Tom DraegerVery good, I'd love to read more. You're use of language is very well done and it's pretty descriptive. Keep up the good work!
6/28/2003 c2 Mbwun
This story is wonderful... I especially loved the description of Allen Thickmann, and the voice of your character is superb. Keep it coming!
~He Who Walks On All Fours
This story is wonderful... I especially loved the description of Allen Thickmann, and the voice of your character is superb. Keep it coming!
~He Who Walks On All Fours
6/22/2003 c1 peanut19
Excellent preface. It doesn't give away much but the narrator sounds like a mysterious person (for now). You have a really good grasp of language. I don't read science-fiction often but your work sound quite interesting. Do update regularly!
Excellent preface. It doesn't give away much but the narrator sounds like a mysterious person (for now). You have a really good grasp of language. I don't read science-fiction often but your work sound quite interesting. Do update regularly!
6/7/2003 c1 Mbwun
Ah, the document mangler. Don't we all know it well...:) Looks good so far, a bit brief to form an opinion, but you've got me interested in reading more... thanks for the review, btw.
~He Who Walks On All Fours
Ah, the document mangler. Don't we all know it well...:) Looks good so far, a bit brief to form an opinion, but you've got me interested in reading more... thanks for the review, btw.
~He Who Walks On All Fours