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8/4/2003 c3 Mbwun
Well, I was rather wondering about the Japanese grill aliens...:) Looking forward to the answers to my questions, so keep it up, man.

~He Who Walks On Al Fours

PS - And never forget that they're called graphic novels. Comic books are for kids.:)
8/3/2003 c3 1Tom Draeger
Very good, I'd love to read more. You're use of language is very well done and it's pretty descriptive. Keep up the good work!
7/23/2003 c3 2Kell Hound
great job keep writing
6/28/2003 c2 Mbwun
This story is wonderful... I especially loved the description of Allen Thickmann, and the voice of your character is superb. Keep it coming!

~He Who Walks On All Fours
6/22/2003 c1 peanut19
Excellent preface. It doesn't give away much but the narrator sounds like a mysterious person (for now). You have a really good grasp of language. I don't read science-fiction often but your work sound quite interesting. Do update regularly!
6/7/2003 c1 Mbwun
Ah, the document mangler. Don't we all know it well...:) Looks good so far, a bit brief to form an opinion, but you've got me interested in reading more... thanks for the review, btw.

~He Who Walks On All Fours

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