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1/23/2013 c4 BritishBookworm
Did he seriously just call her a wench?! :')
Haha, loving it so far!
12/4/2012 c21 Guest
lovedddddddddd it
4/21/2012 c21 6GreysonDrew
I know that I'm like, a DECADE late, but I love this story. It is amazing, and I think you are a fantastic writer. I would be happy to see Aliena and David once again, though. You have a talent for writing, and I thank you for sharing it :) Keep up the good work!
12/13/2010 c21 cheesecake15
Well that was a very cute story, slightly cliche, but very cute.

. xx .
10/9/2010 c21 16non.graceful
naw... i'm disapointed that you didn't carry out David's main personality... and add on with a couple scenarios with his friends... overall... it was GOOD!
8/30/2010 c8 Selzilla
Quick question, I thought Kyle was Aliena's boyfriend? :/
7/1/2010 c21 1munz03
Cute story... :)
5/4/2010 c1 SlugHunter
"Luckily it only took her 5 minutes to get to school from the subway." did you mean luckily it only took her 5 minutes to get to the trainstation from her house? and later she goes into the subway and catches a bus...

i think theres a few inconsistencies and unintentional misdirections, but it's still got potential

:)
4/14/2010 c9 DA-chen1
hey firespiritess!

i like your story, it's kind of sweet and innocent :-)

DA-chen
11/18/2009 c21 7Your Execution
Aaw I LOVE the last two lines the best :D This story was freakin wonderful I love it :D
6/14/2009 c21 JZK
cute
6/11/2009 c21 4CallMehHayleeD
AWE_! That was wonderful , wonderful , wonderful!
6/11/2009 c15 CallMehHayleeD
YAY! So cute!
1/8/2009 c21 5I Murder on Impulse
HAHAHA CUTE!

XX
1/4/2009 c21 Elesian
cute story,

i really enjoyed it
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