
4/7/2004 c1
29Granite Claws
Honestly, I've TRIED to write like this, first saying what's the matter with something, then saying you just can't give up on it. That's where I crash and burn, but you fly. I liked this one lots.

Honestly, I've TRIED to write like this, first saying what's the matter with something, then saying you just can't give up on it. That's where I crash and burn, but you fly. I liked this one lots.
6/17/2003 c1
17R. W. Rae
wonderful! So sad, and yet the underlying messege of hope. Another great poem!

wonderful! So sad, and yet the underlying messege of hope. Another great poem!
6/7/2003 c1
16Portalkeeper
Awesome, per usual! Love the brutal honesty and clear-cut message. You're great at getting a point across.

Awesome, per usual! Love the brutal honesty and clear-cut message. You're great at getting a point across.