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3/23/2004 c1 ying zheng
aw...how sad...but nicely written.Watch the capitalization of your words and your punctuation. There is an apaustrophe between i and d in "something id never show"...am i annoying you? I guess i am. But still, on your other poem, "again and again" I'd double space if i were you because it seems like poems are easier to read if they are double spaced. You know what i mean?...ok...enough...shutting up...
6/25/2003 c1 Baby Milo
That's really sweet! I luved it keep writing!
6/14/2003 c1 Jenny
Hi Shirley! Dang, your poems are so good! Wait, nevermind.. not good... but great! This poem seems so sad.. and innocent tear just like a happy tear right? Hehe, well I have to read your other poem now.. hope ya write another one soon! And oh, if you do, you better tell me alright!
6/12/2003 c1 3The Granola Barre
hahahah! this is so funnie! no offense curly..HEY. DID YOU JUST BLOCK ME? I HATE YOU AND I WILL KEEP LAUGHING AT YOU
6/10/2003 c1 heheh rie
good poem! i love it :-D i think it's my fave of all the poems you wrote. keep up the great work!
6/9/2003 c1 1BohemianAtHeart
ive read all of your stuff and i think its wonderful! i cant wait for u to post more!
6/8/2003 c1 Yo

Itz tite!

itz beautyful

keep writin cuz ill keep readin ;)

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