for An Innocent TEar3/23/2004 c1 ying zheng
aw...how sad...but nicely written.Watch the capitalization of your words and your punctuation. There is an apaustrophe between i and d in "something id never show"...am i annoying you? I guess i am. But still, on your other poem, "again and again" I'd double space if i were you because it seems like poems are easier to read if they are double spaced. You know what i mean?...ok...enough...shutting up...
aw...how sad...but nicely written.Watch the capitalization of your words and your punctuation. There is an apaustrophe between i and d in "something id never show"...am i annoying you? I guess i am. But still, on your other poem, "again and again" I'd double space if i were you because it seems like poems are easier to read if they are double spaced. You know what i mean?...ok...enough...shutting up...
6/14/2003 c1 Jenny
Hi Shirley! Dang, your poems are so good! Wait, nevermind.. not good... but great! This poem seems so sad.. and innocent tear just like a happy tear right? Hehe, well I have to read your other poem now.. hope ya write another one soon! And oh, if you do, you better tell me alright!
Hi Shirley! Dang, your poems are so good! Wait, nevermind.. not good... but great! This poem seems so sad.. and innocent tear just like a happy tear right? Hehe, well I have to read your other poem now.. hope ya write another one soon! And oh, if you do, you better tell me alright!
6/12/2003 c1 
3The Granola Barre
hahahah! this is so funnie! no offense curly..HEY. DID YOU JUST BLOCK ME? I HATE YOU AND I WILL KEEP LAUGHING AT YOU
3The Granola Barrehahahah! this is so funnie! no offense curly..HEY. DID YOU JUST BLOCK ME? I HATE YOU AND I WILL KEEP LAUGHING AT YOU
6/10/2003 c1 heheh rie
good poem! i love it :-D i think it's my fave of all the poems you wrote. keep up the great work!
good poem! i love it :-D i think it's my fave of all the poems you wrote. keep up the great work!
6/9/2003 c1 1BohemianAtHeart
ive read all of your stuff and i think its wonderful! i cant wait for u to post more!
1BohemianAtHeartive read all of your stuff and i think its wonderful! i cant wait for u to post more!
6/8/2003 c1 Yo
I LOVE THIS
Itz tite!
itz beautyful
keep writin cuz ill keep readin ;)
I LOVE THIS
Itz tite!
itz beautyful
keep writin cuz ill keep readin ;)