for Harrem7/16/2009 c3 JNxlush
i'm very confused at the moment @_@... so the baby that the man was Thorate and the couple from 20 years ago was Mr. Seed and his wife?... sory if my questions annoy you...
i'm very confused at the moment @_@... so the baby that the man was Thorate and the couple from 20 years ago was Mr. Seed and his wife?... sory if my questions annoy you...
2/9/2006 c14 
3S McCall
Really enjoying it! I was wondering, do you plan on finishing this one? I hope you do, it's better than Immortality, although, I really liked that one too. In any case, hope you keep writing.
3S McCallReally enjoying it! I was wondering, do you plan on finishing this one? I hope you do, it's better than Immortality, although, I really liked that one too. In any case, hope you keep writing.
9/3/2004 c1 4jemraja
oh dark...dark... still intriguing though with the (luv the name) evil Mr Seed... yes well im gonna hope...thru the R rating - yu've promised a good story ^^
4jemrajaoh dark...dark... still intriguing though with the (luv the name) evil Mr Seed... yes well im gonna hope...thru the R rating - yu've promised a good story ^^
12/24/2003 c1 caty
well, since you beg so well...it's acutally quite sick, but i'm sure you've heard that before. it does have the makings of a good story, so i am going to stop talking and read on.
well, since you beg so well...it's acutally quite sick, but i'm sure you've heard that before. it does have the makings of a good story, so i am going to stop talking and read on.
10/5/2003 c14 1futagoat02
very interesting... kinda confusing, but i think i get it... keeps skipping around... mumble, mumble... anyway, really like thorate/dark! like it, love it, update soon!
baibaiyukie
1futagoat02very interesting... kinda confusing, but i think i get it... keeps skipping around... mumble, mumble... anyway, really like thorate/dark! like it, love it, update soon!
baibaiyukie
9/17/2003 c14 55dragongurl99
ive been a big fan of immortality and thought id check out your other work. I really like it, it has a certain dire nature to it, and its kinda chilling. but i like the character development so far! keep up with writing it, i really like it!
55dragongurl99ive been a big fan of immortality and thought id check out your other work. I really like it, it has a certain dire nature to it, and its kinda chilling. but i like the character development so far! keep up with writing it, i really like it!
9/2/2003 c7 Cai
Y'know what's sad? That all the kids and stuff still think Seed's a good guy. Grr! I want some photos! Evidence! Thorate! And it's also sad that Was is all jealous of Thorate [/Martyr, I guess] later. I do like him a lot in this chapter, but in Jyani you don't like him... *cries* Appies! I'm confused! @.x
Y'know what's sad? That all the kids and stuff still think Seed's a good guy. Grr! I want some photos! Evidence! Thorate! And it's also sad that Was is all jealous of Thorate [/Martyr, I guess] later. I do like him a lot in this chapter, but in Jyani you don't like him... *cries* Appies! I'm confused! @.x
9/2/2003 c6 Cai
Bwahaha! Boy am I glad I started this one up again! I can't believe how long it took me to remember who Stone was talking about in the beginning of this chapter, Apz. I was like, "Hm... who could not like the word 'done'?" XD *feels stupid* duh!
Bwahaha! Boy am I glad I started this one up again! I can't believe how long it took me to remember who Stone was talking about in the beginning of this chapter, Apz. I was like, "Hm... who could not like the word 'done'?" XD *feels stupid* duh!
8/22/2003 c7 4Tuatha De Danann
YES! MR SEED IS DEAD! lol.. I am so happy =) There was me feeling all sorry for poor Thorate - then you offed Mr Seed! THANK YOU =)
Yes and Henna is right - a very profound five-year-old is Thorate! Wow..
Hey, bring the next chapter soon, please!
4Tuatha De DanannYES! MR SEED IS DEAD! lol.. I am so happy =) There was me feeling all sorry for poor Thorate - then you offed Mr Seed! THANK YOU =)
Yes and Henna is right - a very profound five-year-old is Thorate! Wow..
Hey, bring the next chapter soon, please!
8/21/2003 c7 25Henna
lol, yeah he was so great. *grins*
Anyway, Mr. Seed let Thorate hide all day? Somehow it seemed to me that he would be the type of guy to make Thorate clean his house or something while he worked. And what a profound five-year-old!
Goddess Bless...
Henna
25Hennalol, yeah he was so great. *grins*
Anyway, Mr. Seed let Thorate hide all day? Somehow it seemed to me that he would be the type of guy to make Thorate clean his house or something while he worked. And what a profound five-year-old!
Goddess Bless...
Henna
7/31/2003 c6 1Durine
hehe, this is finny, i'm on the floor with glee and laughter. Just one question, what is a shuriken?
1Durinehehe, this is finny, i'm on the floor with glee and laughter. Just one question, what is a shuriken?
7/28/2003 c6 25Henna
"Chives stared down at his two fingers, now lying in a growing pile of their own blood. They twitched… wasn’t that interesting?"
Bwahahahahahaha! That was possibly the greatest thing I have ever read! I was laughing so hard... :O) Reminds me of Jack Sparrow in Pirates of the Carrabian. lol.
Goddess Bless...
Henna
25Henna"Chives stared down at his two fingers, now lying in a growing pile of their own blood. They twitched… wasn’t that interesting?"
Bwahahahahahaha! That was possibly the greatest thing I have ever read! I was laughing so hard... :O) Reminds me of Jack Sparrow in Pirates of the Carrabian. lol.
Goddess Bless...
Henna