for Ghosts3/28/2004 c1 snow zephyr
This was beautiful! I love your descriptive way of writing, especially how you use fragments of sentences and single words. It creates this whole mood. I also love the lat sentence "and slowly the rhymes were beaten into mud..." Fantastic job!
This was beautiful! I love your descriptive way of writing, especially how you use fragments of sentences and single words. It creates this whole mood. I also love the lat sentence "and slowly the rhymes were beaten into mud..." Fantastic job!
7/11/2003 c1 ChichiX
That was beautiful. I, I, really. Exactly the right amount of writing, and in the end you made it feel complete, not as if it was missing something by being written this way. Simple, profound, deep, not pretending to be anything other than it is. No lies of words or dramatization, quiet, hushed, straightforward and sorrowful.
That was beautiful. I, I, really. Exactly the right amount of writing, and in the end you made it feel complete, not as if it was missing something by being written this way. Simple, profound, deep, not pretending to be anything other than it is. No lies of words or dramatization, quiet, hushed, straightforward and sorrowful.
6/8/2003 c1 
39zelle
oh wow...hey, this was seriously good and I' so surprised that there aren't any reviews! I mean, the structure was great and the way everything was put...it was like there was a history behind this house and these two elves were exploring through it and...it was good ^_^
*puts on favorites*
39zelleoh wow...hey, this was seriously good and I' so surprised that there aren't any reviews! I mean, the structure was great and the way everything was put...it was like there was a history behind this house and these two elves were exploring through it and...it was good ^_^
*puts on favorites*