Reviews: Slow Jive | FictionPress

2/28/2004 c1 romancingthemoon
This is a delicious poem. Love can be so good sometimes.

6/8/2003 c1

26Vilyamorna
Simple but very elegant- every word is placed to perfection. I love the comparison to music.

6/8/2003 c1

2blinkie
very sensual and very hypnotic. i like the part where you used colors. great job!

blinkie