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9/22/2003 c1 42Caitir
well done. very nice, I like it. simple but beautiful.
8/11/2003 c1 7Dark Hamadryad
Hey it's the thought that counts.

~Luna
8/8/2003 c1 57teh tarik
That was a really short piece, but it was seriously meaningful. Great choice of words. Persevere everyone and stay strong...
7/9/2003 c1 12Lady Estra
That is one piece of beautiful, amazing writing...it's very emotional and wonderful...and the tribute idea is so beautiful...hehe I think I need to extend my vocabulary!

~*LAdyEstra*~
6/27/2003 c1 292Fabian Cortez
Moving, disturbing, excellent.

FC
6/22/2003 c1 28Kellza
I like the repetition of the thought: "keep breathing."

Sometimes that's all you can reasonably ask a person to do. Literally, or figuratively.

My hopes lie with yours.
6/20/2003 c1 12Silverlight Elf
Oh.. wow... This is great.. I hope it gets to Princess Mulan!
6/18/2003 c1 13Davido Martino
That's very touching.

Nothing can be improved - it's perfect!

:)
6/17/2003 c1 20Starlight Rain
This is a beautiful tribute, and a wonderful thought of strenght to anybody who is feeling sad. It seems almost like something to be chanted during a breathing excersize...

~~Starlight Rain
6/15/2003 c1 The Black Rider
I hate reading poems about Princess Mulan. They make me so sad, to think of the wonderful writer and person she was, and the legend she has left behind. Oh, I wish she'd come back.

Another lovely tribute to one of the masters.
6/13/2003 c1 30Silverfire Starr
This is really beautiful, and it's so simply written. Nice!
6/13/2003 c1 148Dystorque
Such a gorgeous sentiment... It makes me feel invincible just to read it.
6/13/2003 c1 1Jimmy Jazz
Oh wow... well done. Very touching. I also often worry about Princess Mulan, I wonder what could have happened...

Also, well done on winning the Poets Of Today competition, great poem there.
6/12/2003 c1 62Twistedlyinsane
Wow this is such a great poem.I really like the topic you choose to write about and how it came across as encouraging them to fight and at the same time to be saying that everything will be ok.^_^(Sorry for reviewing so late but my little brothers been sick)
6/8/2003 c1 GrungeIsDead
Wow, Sal. That was really good. Thanks for putting in the SARS bit, I am from Canada, and I've been praying every night for the people who have SARS.. It's really sad. That was a great poem. I can see why it's hard to explain, or even write, but it was really good. Keep it up! Oh yeah, the Tic-Tac bit was in because the giant gophers had really smelly breath, and Tic-Tacs help freshen it up... get it now?

Amme1212
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