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11/27/2004 c1 11Earthsong12
I really really like this story. I love the idea. It's definetly going on my favorites. Poor Benjamin. :( I don't get something. If in order to fix his problem he had to make someone else "unreal", then she would have to go make someone else "unreal" and it would keep being passed around. Why couldn't Benjamin just stay how he was?Anyway, very cool story, awesome job!
2/5/2004 c1 28Diana Shore
Really cool! Although, I'm a bit confused as to why Claire would knowingly send Benjamin to alter someone else's fate just to re-align his own...
6/18/2003 c1 27Nicole Lauren
Simply marvelous. It has been a long time since I read a story with such a vivid plot. I thought you did justice with the ending too. Poor Professor Coleman, I bet she'll have an even HARDER time managing the class now. :P

It'd be interesting to see how things work out with Allison and Jared too. I think you did a wonderful job playing with whole concept of fate. Kinda brings up the idea that you can only escape fate for so long before it catches up to you.

Peace out,

Nikki
3/12/2003 c1 7Shelti M
Wow. Cool. A little odd, but very cool. Interesting views on what fate is.
11/8/2002 c1 12Dawn I. Cambridge
I love it. I really do!
11/3/2002 c1 8Posi
O.O wow. This is a really good story. When I was about eight or nine, I used to read like a rock-I couldn't hear or see anything that was going on around me-but I haven't done that for a really long time (too busy with school... ugh.) until I read this story... It's really good! I like the suspense and, well, the ending is sad and stuff but it's ok... the theory it's based on is a little screwed, I mean, his personality made him do what his mother told him, but still, I like it!
6/12/2002 c1 34Sparkles-Chan
:*( That's so sad! Very good, but so sad!
3/3/2002 c1 195ReaDiNGS DaRK RoSe
do you belive in fate? im just wondering. This is an amazing story! really great!

Jamixxxx
2/16/2002 c1 7Snowlily
WHOA! That was... WONDERFUL! It was a bit confusing at first, but I loved how it ended. It was truly amazing, and I'd have to say that I've never seen anything like it. Thank you so much for reviewing so many of my poems and fics! I'm going to read your other Harry Potter fic now! ~Lils
2/7/2002 c1 29Katterree Fengari
THIs is good too! Ok, bout Benjamin, I'm in the middle of ur fic, and this is me, proving I knew it before u wrote it!...or something like that,...by CLaire's second talk to Allison warning bout Benjamin, he's going to die soon, or he's like a ghost..cus, ppl don't see him always...hmm..not really clear...

Wait! So now Professor Colemen has the doomed life! so...one set right, another set wrong! ooooo...hmm...U WRIte good! Keep it up!
1/26/2002 c1 box
that was wonderful... it's so... wow...
1/25/2002 c1 8Raonaid Luckwell
Wow..this is really disturbing.. but I like it. Thank you for enjoying my song fics. Never put much thoughts into getting anything published
12/9/2001 c1 15Xilmin Nerrar
... I'm speechless! All I can say is 'wow!' I've never read anything like it, but I really really *really* liked that a lot! Very dramatic and freaky! The ending was just marvelous, and a perfect way to finish it off... wow...
11/25/2001 c1 57The Angry Generalization
Oish. Creepy. If you haven't already, you should read "Mort" by Terry Pratchett. Gibrit Millnium Hand and Shrimp and whatnot.
4/8/2001 c1 Zab1
Wow... that was twilight zone-ish... *Very* marvelous plot idea, beautifully carried out, I must say. Reminded me of the kind of thing I might find in one of my favorite books of ghost stories. If you keep at this, I'm sure one day I'll have to go to the bookstore to get your stories =)

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