for Scars12/19/2003 c1 
32aconsciousjulia
ive read this before...but i never reviewed it...i love this poem...i love it so much...and as i drift into this exact picture the words ring true in my head...ugh...parents these days...
love ya doll,
*jules*
32aconsciousjuliaive read this before...but i never reviewed it...i love this poem...i love it so much...and as i drift into this exact picture the words ring true in my head...ugh...parents these days...
love ya doll,
*jules*
10/15/2003 c1 Lantana
that was realy nicely written... i like how u switched from one voice to another... u got each one down just right!
that was realy nicely written... i like how u switched from one voice to another... u got each one down just right!
10/8/2003 c1 13HeavyMetalMaiden
wow, this is good. Really good. My own words are filthly compared to your brillent eloquence. I love it. I really do.
13HeavyMetalMaidenwow, this is good. Really good. My own words are filthly compared to your brillent eloquence. I love it. I really do.
9/18/2003 c1 Julia
"heh. i laugh bitterly" as do i!
hehe i like this dark side of you it reminds me of me
but where did all our montessori memories go
why are we all somehow lost in a hole
each one of us different
abnormal
imperfect
where did all our hapiness go
haha i almostish made a poem
but truely...each one of us is screwed up in some way...or oblivious to anything at all...crap-ola...
*jules*
"heh. i laugh bitterly" as do i!
hehe i like this dark side of you it reminds me of me
but where did all our montessori memories go
why are we all somehow lost in a hole
each one of us different
abnormal
imperfect
where did all our hapiness go
haha i almostish made a poem
but truely...each one of us is screwed up in some way...or oblivious to anything at all...crap-ola...
*jules*
8/6/2003 c1 Colorain
. . . and the mere fact that you read my stuff and continue to review it astounds me. Much like this poem.
It is *awesome*. Not like anything of yours *isn't* awesome, but . . . gah. No words. No words for how perfect this is.
. . . and the mere fact that you read my stuff and continue to review it astounds me. Much like this poem.
It is *awesome*. Not like anything of yours *isn't* awesome, but . . . gah. No words. No words for how perfect this is.
7/10/2003 c1 Whoever
I don't laugh. I applaud.
I don't laugh. I applaud.
6/27/2003 c1 40AvaRicE
So true.
Alot of emotion shows through this as I read it, more so towards the end, as the poem becomes more fast-paced.
Great poem :)
40AvaRicESo true.
Alot of emotion shows through this as I read it, more so towards the end, as the poem becomes more fast-paced.
Great poem :)
6/13/2003 c1 64not sure yet
i like it, pretty, interesting and slightly sick, hehehehehehe...alrighty, honestly, i love the wording and the way their played around with, muchly enjoyed, nicely done
64not sure yeti like it, pretty, interesting and slightly sick, hehehehehehe...alrighty, honestly, i love the wording and the way their played around with, muchly enjoyed, nicely done
6/11/2003 c1 Abandoned Love
our newest poems almost have the same title! except mine is titled "scar". yours is better than mine :D
our newest poems almost have the same title! except mine is titled "scar". yours is better than mine :D
6/9/2003 c1 Darkangel Rose
Oh my goodness. That was wow. Charredrose, there is literally smoke coming out of my ears because that fried my brain (in a good way). I like it, and I don't think it could be interpretted in a bad way against goths. The last two lines just killed me. Really. Wow, this is amazing. It just hints at some things while going into depths in others ... and it leaves with a feeling of completion. I like this so much. You rule, you rule, you rule, go you!
Absolutely brutal. Brilliant. ::applauds::
Oh my goodness. That was wow. Charredrose, there is literally smoke coming out of my ears because that fried my brain (in a good way). I like it, and I don't think it could be interpretted in a bad way against goths. The last two lines just killed me. Really. Wow, this is amazing. It just hints at some things while going into depths in others ... and it leaves with a feeling of completion. I like this so much. You rule, you rule, you rule, go you!
Absolutely brutal. Brilliant. ::applauds::
6/9/2003 c1 Kyalia yes same one
I like it a lot. Asi es la vita...
I like it a lot. Asi es la vita...
6/8/2003 c1 129kissing suicide
i love it. it's sincere truth could not have been any clearer. i applaud you. i truely, truely do.
129kissing suicidei love it. it's sincere truth could not have been any clearer. i applaud you. i truely, truely do.
6/8/2003 c1 36Mandrake-CoRn
Wow...Really great, you have a seriously laid down attitude, it's incredible. I really loved the way you wrote it down, it made sense you know? Relatable, don't...Do anything though k?
36Mandrake-CoRnWow...Really great, you have a seriously laid down attitude, it's incredible. I really loved the way you wrote it down, it made sense you know? Relatable, don't...Do anything though k?