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6/9/2003 c1 1childstar
Hey, I don't care what some people say, I think rhyming poems are great -I have to say I really respect them more than non-rhyming ones. Haha, funny I know, and even if yours does sound kinda corny in structure in some places, well done anyway. Thanks for reviewing mine, it means a lot to me.
6/8/2003 c1 15sxe
Dorky? yes

touching? definately

its a kindof tacky structureing system but i like your emotions. the way you express your relief in the last stanza was very good!

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