7/6/2003 c3 me
Nice story! Update soon!
Nice story! Update soon!
6/14/2003 c2 11splotchy
I know this is weird for a story with only 3 chapters, but, I've already started drawing out the characters for PortalKeepers! I will start chapter 4 and the manga soon, and I might even put up the manga online! Provided I fix my scanner and finish the drawings in time. ^^
I know this is weird for a story with only 3 chapters, but, I've already started drawing out the characters for PortalKeepers! I will start chapter 4 and the manga soon, and I might even put up the manga online! Provided I fix my scanner and finish the drawings in time. ^^
6/11/2003 c3 7Destin
Sorry I have to review again. I'm hooked to this story. I loved the connection with the dream, and how Miyumi is the water portal keeper person. This is so cool! I can't wait till next chapter !
-Destin Scar
Sorry I have to review again. I'm hooked to this story. I loved the connection with the dream, and how Miyumi is the water portal keeper person. This is so cool! I can't wait till next chapter !
-Destin Scar
6/10/2003 c2 8The One Still Called El Diablo
Resha's dream...very intersesting (in a good way)! i'll read the other chaps asap!
Resha's dream...very intersesting (in a good way)! i'll read the other chaps asap!
6/10/2003 c2 7Destin
I love how you decride Resha' dreams ! There so action like, and really cool! Please continue. This story's so cool! I want to read more !
-Destin Scar
I love how you decride Resha' dreams ! There so action like, and really cool! Please continue. This story's so cool! I want to read more !
-Destin Scar
6/9/2003 c1 Destin
I liked this chapter. Resha's dream got me into this story. Great way to kick the story off. I can't believe Resha's luck. It's not her fault that she thought Satano's name was funny. I would laugh at it too. Well anyway good story, and if you want check out one of my stories. Update soon , please this sounds really good !
-Destin Scar
I liked this chapter. Resha's dream got me into this story. Great way to kick the story off. I can't believe Resha's luck. It's not her fault that she thought Satano's name was funny. I would laugh at it too. Well anyway good story, and if you want check out one of my stories. Update soon , please this sounds really good !
-Destin Scar
6/9/2003 c1 8The One Still Called El Diablo
i like stories which relate to high school (i go to John F Kennedy High School). anywayz, cool story. that Satano is one MEAN dude, and that's putting it lightly. keep the chapters coming! PS-R/R my fic please!
i like stories which relate to high school (i go to John F Kennedy High School). anywayz, cool story. that Satano is one MEAN dude, and that's putting it lightly. keep the chapters coming! PS-R/R my fic please!