for The Lost King6/30/2003 c8 
17Bob n Kazzi
Whatever you do, please don't let Adan be pregnant. Please God! Oh, and this is really good. A bit short, but good.
Update. You must hate me using that word by now, musn't you. Oh well. UPDATE!
17Bob n KazziWhatever you do, please don't let Adan be pregnant. Please God! Oh, and this is really good. A bit short, but good.
Update. You must hate me using that word by now, musn't you. Oh well. UPDATE!
6/29/2003 c8 1gm3fr3k
im very glad that u dont make ur characters too perfect. u add just the right amount to make the real, not too perfect, not too...stupid...lolz. anyway, i like it! n i'm glad Adonis is finally pushing Adan away...Adan sounds like such a spoiled priss...anyway, g'job! did joo finish reading the new harry potter yet? i bet u finished it in record time...lolz
-jace-
1gm3fr3kim very glad that u dont make ur characters too perfect. u add just the right amount to make the real, not too perfect, not too...stupid...lolz. anyway, i like it! n i'm glad Adonis is finally pushing Adan away...Adan sounds like such a spoiled priss...anyway, g'job! did joo finish reading the new harry potter yet? i bet u finished it in record time...lolz
-jace-
6/29/2003 c8 6Lisa0211
So he's finally seeing passed Adan? why doesn't he kick her out. i bet she'll get pregnant. oh, i wonder what would happen there. and yay for feodor and eldoris. you should try realy hard cause i really liked them. kill adan. i don't like her. hehe. write more soon.
6Lisa0211So he's finally seeing passed Adan? why doesn't he kick her out. i bet she'll get pregnant. oh, i wonder what would happen there. and yay for feodor and eldoris. you should try realy hard cause i really liked them. kill adan. i don't like her. hehe. write more soon.
6/29/2003 c8 57NeWriter
I LOVED this chapter! It shows, even though ti doesn´t say it that he grew a lot mentally and wasn´t seduced by Adan! Well done =)
57NeWriterI LOVED this chapter! It shows, even though ti doesn´t say it that he grew a lot mentally and wasn´t seduced by Adan! Well done =)
6/29/2003 c7 17Bob n Kazzi
Have I reviewed this chapter yet or not - but anywayz, this is great. Yeah, it did feel like an ending, but hey, this just means the real ending - which hopefully is coming soon after more great chapters - will be even better.
Kazzi
17Bob n KazziHave I reviewed this chapter yet or not - but anywayz, this is great. Yeah, it did feel like an ending, but hey, this just means the real ending - which hopefully is coming soon after more great chapters - will be even better.
Kazzi
6/29/2003 c7 am
i thought Kyros got married to some woman he really loved?
what happened to her, and how come he had to use prostitutes at some point?
man, i can't believe kyros and isidore are getting old! by any chance are you gonna do a view of how feodor and eldoris are seeing this from heaven (or wherever it is they are)?
i thought Kyros got married to some woman he really loved?
what happened to her, and how come he had to use prostitutes at some point?
man, i can't believe kyros and isidore are getting old! by any chance are you gonna do a view of how feodor and eldoris are seeing this from heaven (or wherever it is they are)?
6/27/2003 c7 Bob n Kazzi
Brilliant. Update. You're fifteen. Wahoo!
Brilliant. Update. You're fifteen. Wahoo!
6/26/2003 c7 newfoundglory
where's kalonice?
where's kalonice?
6/26/2003 c7 6Lisa0211
Well, this is sophisticated writing for one who is only 15! Good job. you are talented like my brother, and that's saying a lot because he's brilliant. This chapter was perfect. Especially the emotions. They were paced correctly and voiced correctly. Just a really fine job overall! Keep writing.
6Lisa0211Well, this is sophisticated writing for one who is only 15! Good job. you are talented like my brother, and that's saying a lot because he's brilliant. This chapter was perfect. Especially the emotions. They were paced correctly and voiced correctly. Just a really fine job overall! Keep writing.
6/26/2003 c7 yoSHimaMa009
yes...it must be a happy story...lolz. its ok if its short, jenny. it doesnt realli matter! quality is best!
yes...it must be a happy story...lolz. its ok if its short, jenny. it doesnt realli matter! quality is best!
6/26/2003 c7 1J.M.W
Good chapter if a little frustering. Man, Adonis is learning the hard way about love, isn't he? Please write more soon! I can't wait to find out what happends!
1J.M.WGood chapter if a little frustering. Man, Adonis is learning the hard way about love, isn't he? Please write more soon! I can't wait to find out what happends!
6/26/2003 c7 5MandyHubbard
good chapter, lots of action! and i am so happy it wont have a sad ending! YAY.
one thing though. isnt mycanae supposed to be Kyro's kingdom? He's next in line for the throne. i thougth taht was what he wanted? and did he ever marry? a king needs heirs! LOL.
Panda
5MandyHubbardgood chapter, lots of action! and i am so happy it wont have a sad ending! YAY.
one thing though. isnt mycanae supposed to be Kyro's kingdom? He's next in line for the throne. i thougth taht was what he wanted? and did he ever marry? a king needs heirs! LOL.
Panda