for The Lost King6/10/2003 c1 
2Thedextroustiger
extremely cute... It's sad how they both died... but it turned out all good... Somehow I know what's going to happen in the future of your story...
2Thedextroustigerextremely cute... It's sad how they both died... but it turned out all good... Somehow I know what's going to happen in the future of your story...
6/10/2003 c1 6Lisa0211
No, since Adonis is the once to be king I think he was the right choice. It just sounded right. If you went from Isidore's perspective...it might be a bit overbearing. he will be grieving over Eldoris' death to much for him to tell a proper story. Xan, I don't know that doesn't fit, and the other two girls are too young. So ya, Adonis is good. Also, I liked the story. If you want me to read over it or anything, I could do that for you. I find myself drawn in by the story.
6Lisa0211No, since Adonis is the once to be king I think he was the right choice. It just sounded right. If you went from Isidore's perspective...it might be a bit overbearing. he will be grieving over Eldoris' death to much for him to tell a proper story. Xan, I don't know that doesn't fit, and the other two girls are too young. So ya, Adonis is good. Also, I liked the story. If you want me to read over it or anything, I could do that for you. I find myself drawn in by the story.
6/9/2003 c1 5FlyingPhish
I TOLD YOU TO SMITE KALONICE *SOBS* Oh geez. YOU shall smite her eventually. I love you Jen! and all your wonderful works. Perhaps I shall drool.
5FlyingPhishI TOLD YOU TO SMITE KALONICE *SOBS* Oh geez. YOU shall smite her eventually. I love you Jen! and all your wonderful works. Perhaps I shall drool.
6/9/2003 c1 THiSXBiTES
tOO lazY tO siGn iN...dOnt hate me! =] um, its good, but i dunno about adonis as the pov. i personally think that he's too young. but whatever, what do i know? =]
tOO lazY tO siGn iN...dOnt hate me! =] um, its good, but i dunno about adonis as the pov. i personally think that he's too young. but whatever, what do i know? =]