for The Lost King12/1/2004 c16 
5Flutist
A sequel, who would have thought? This is a great sequel. You have developed the story very well. Maybe u can make a sequel to this one. That would probably be very hard, but maybe u can try. I bet u can do it. I believe in u.
5FlutistA sequel, who would have thought? This is a great sequel. You have developed the story very well. Maybe u can make a sequel to this one. That would probably be very hard, but maybe u can try. I bet u can do it. I believe in u.
11/29/2004 c1 Flutist
OMH! Awesome! I loved the Once and Furture Queen and I know that I will love this one. Great job!
OMH! Awesome! I loved the Once and Furture Queen and I know that I will love this one. Great job!
10/11/2004 c16 Ti
I just had to read this again... Great story!
-THE RANDOM CRITIC-
I just had to read this again... Great story!
-THE RANDOM CRITIC-
8/5/2004 c15 sweet hunny
KALONICE IS DEAD! WOO WOO! KALONICE IS DEAD! WOO WOO!
lol..awesome story! just as good as the first! love love love!
KALONICE IS DEAD! WOO WOO! KALONICE IS DEAD! WOO WOO!
lol..awesome story! just as good as the first! love love love!
8/4/2004 c10 sweet hunny
i love this story even more! it has so much drama..but the drama isnt that cheesy shit. this is real. i can actually feel the pain all the characters are goin through!
i love this story even more! it has so much drama..but the drama isnt that cheesy shit. this is real. i can actually feel the pain all the characters are goin through!
8/4/2004 c8 sweet hunny
hey! thank god u've finally killed Chloe! i was so happy! what a bitch of a woman. i can't wait to see Kalonice's fate!
hey! thank god u've finally killed Chloe! i was so happy! what a bitch of a woman. i can't wait to see Kalonice's fate!
8/4/2004 c7 sweet hunny
hey! thank god u've finally killed Chloe! what a bitch of a woman. i can't wait to see Kalonice's fate!
hey! thank god u've finally killed Chloe! what a bitch of a woman. i can't wait to see Kalonice's fate!
4/15/2004 c16 Spikes-Kitty-Kat-Tiffany
Omg this story was so good aswell as the one before linking the two it was really well thought of and creative
Omg this story was so good aswell as the one before linking the two it was really well thought of and creative
3/30/2004 c16 7Somediddlyother
I liked the stories a lot, but purely for their value as romances. I read you wanted to publish, but I think both the story and the sequel need to be edited and possibly re-written with more research involved. I spotted a lot of grammar and spelling issues you might want to fix as well. Good luck! :D
7SomediddlyotherI liked the stories a lot, but purely for their value as romances. I read you wanted to publish, but I think both the story and the sequel need to be edited and possibly re-written with more research involved. I spotted a lot of grammar and spelling issues you might want to fix as well. Good luck! :D
3/30/2004 c3 dedredhed
Public baths in greece were individual shallow pools for each person to bathe in. Romans had one big large pool for everyone to bathe in. Both cultures had seperate pools for men and women.
Public baths in greece were individual shallow pools for each person to bathe in. Romans had one big large pool for everyone to bathe in. Both cultures had seperate pools for men and women.
2/21/2004 c16 1psychedelic mishap
omg...i loved your story!
its really really really good! its definitely finished...hasnt it? *sniff* it was a really really good story.
i thought it was great how you intertwined greek mythology with it. kinda reminds me of this book called troy. hav u read it? its abt greek mythology too.
unfortunately, ive forgotten who nemesis is. all i knoe is that she hated the three fates or where their sister or something like that. oh well..
great story!
1psychedelic mishapomg...i loved your story!
its really really really good! its definitely finished...hasnt it? *sniff* it was a really really good story.
i thought it was great how you intertwined greek mythology with it. kinda reminds me of this book called troy. hav u read it? its abt greek mythology too.
unfortunately, ive forgotten who nemesis is. all i knoe is that she hated the three fates or where their sister or something like that. oh well..
great story!
1/12/2004 c4 yvonne
Um...hi i have just stumbled upon your remarkable work. i was wonderin how is Adan pronounced. I have a guy friend whose name is spelled Adan and its pronounced uh-don cuz he's Hispanic well n e wayz please email me to lemme know
Um...hi i have just stumbled upon your remarkable work. i was wonderin how is Adan pronounced. I have a guy friend whose name is spelled Adan and its pronounced uh-don cuz he's Hispanic well n e wayz please email me to lemme know
12/25/2003 c16 Yuki-Yuurei
That was fantastic! whoot whoot! yOu have talent! Great story. I enjoyed it beyond words.
That was fantastic! whoot whoot! yOu have talent! Great story. I enjoyed it beyond words.