for The Lost King10/24/2003 c2 Write Me Thrilled
I am lovin it and i especially like the name of this chappie cause me name is Nicole lol memememe hehehe
I am lovin it and i especially like the name of this chappie cause me name is Nicole lol memememe hehehe
10/23/2003 c16 ShorTi
wow... tht took such a long time to read! i read the story n its sequel in one day! yay for me! :) c ya in anotha story!
-THE RANDOM CRITIC
wow... tht took such a long time to read! i read the story n its sequel in one day! yay for me! :) c ya in anotha story!
-THE RANDOM CRITIC
10/23/2003 c16 ShorTi
wow... tht took such a long time to read! i read the story n its sequel in one day! yay for me! :) c ya in anotha story!
-THE RANDOM CRITIC
wow... tht took such a long time to read! i read the story n its sequel in one day! yay for me! :) c ya in anotha story!
-THE RANDOM CRITIC
10/19/2003 c16 zagato
Great story! This is amazing. However, I was surprised at the ourtrage Adonis showed to Chloe, Adan, and Kalonice. I think that was just barbaric. Anyway, this story is really good. Please write more.
Great story! This is amazing. However, I was surprised at the ourtrage Adonis showed to Chloe, Adan, and Kalonice. I think that was just barbaric. Anyway, this story is really good. Please write more.
10/11/2003 c1 Write Me Thrilled
i just finished reading your other book. the firest one of the two ...it is wonderfull.i also love this chapter
i just finished reading your other book. the firest one of the two ...it is wonderfull.i also love this chapter
319/20/2003 c16 Mai ID
wow! this was so good! i would have reviewed for all the chapters but i was so caught up in the reading, i forgot to review! it was amazing! and i really liked the part when the gods came and helped Adonis. It was a great story! if you have time , can you take a look at my story? it's called Out of the Darkness. i just posted up the first chapter yesterday though.
wow! this was so good! i would have reviewed for all the chapters but i was so caught up in the reading, i forgot to review! it was amazing! and i really liked the part when the gods came and helped Adonis. It was a great story! if you have time , can you take a look at my story? it's called Out of the Darkness. i just posted up the first chapter yesterday though.
9/11/2003 c13 BaZoRRo
hmm...that was satisfying...stupid buttface deserved it...ahhahahaha...i love the gods and goddesses...they are awesome...
~the infamous BaZoRRo
hmm...that was satisfying...stupid buttface deserved it...ahhahahaha...i love the gods and goddesses...they are awesome...
~the infamous BaZoRRo