for The Lost King9/11/2003 c11 
3BaZoRRo
ok...why not...i was happy for adonis when he could see his parents
~the infamous BaZoRRo
3BaZoRRook...why not...i was happy for adonis when he could see his parents
~the infamous BaZoRRo
9/9/2003 c5 BaZoRRo
lolz...u can notice the difference from when you are in your writing mood and when you are not...good chapter...i would read the rest but...i have to go to bed so i can go to ur house this weekend...i must be obedient...hmm...bored...good chapter...can't wait to read the rest
~teh infamous BaZoRRo
lolz...u can notice the difference from when you are in your writing mood and when you are not...good chapter...i would read the rest but...i have to go to bed so i can go to ur house this weekend...i must be obedient...hmm...bored...good chapter...can't wait to read the rest
~teh infamous BaZoRRo
9/8/2003 c3 3BaZoRRo
not that bad...i like adonis...i almost feel as if i'm gonna jynx and that you are going to kill him now...well not now...but at the end of course...adonis reminds me of kyros...and calandra reminds me of eldoris...yup yup yup...i am bored...gonna go read...
~the infamous BaZoRRo
3BaZoRRonot that bad...i like adonis...i almost feel as if i'm gonna jynx and that you are going to kill him now...well not now...but at the end of course...adonis reminds me of kyros...and calandra reminds me of eldoris...yup yup yup...i am bored...gonna go read...
~the infamous BaZoRRo
9/8/2003 c2 BaZoRRo
hmm very delightful chapter you got there...very delightful...but why did you have to change adonis' name...i liked his name...what is wrong with you? ok well i had more to say but i can't remember...
~the infamous BaZoRRo
hmm very delightful chapter you got there...very delightful...but why did you have to change adonis' name...i liked his name...what is wrong with you? ok well i had more to say but i can't remember...
~the infamous BaZoRRo
9/8/2003 c1 BaZoRRo
wow...i love this story so far...remind me again why i never read it...it is so terrifical...it is just so wonderful...that is so sad what you did to adonis' parents...but i am not crying over it...maybe because i am one of the few people that realizes your writing style...which is to kill off at least one main character by the end of the story...why the hell did you shoot isidore? what is wwrong with you? do you want adonis to have nothing...wait i remember now...you like your characters without mothers and fatehrs of any sort...
~the infamous BaZoRRo
wow...i love this story so far...remind me again why i never read it...it is so terrifical...it is just so wonderful...that is so sad what you did to adonis' parents...but i am not crying over it...maybe because i am one of the few people that realizes your writing style...which is to kill off at least one main character by the end of the story...why the hell did you shoot isidore? what is wwrong with you? do you want adonis to have nothing...wait i remember now...you like your characters without mothers and fatehrs of any sort...
~the infamous BaZoRRo
9/7/2003 c2 15LiNdSaY.AP
whuhoo! i love sequels, and this one is good! you're so lucky you might get a story published! my parents arent up to paying for one...now, i read on!
15LiNdSaY.APwhuhoo! i love sequels, and this one is good! you're so lucky you might get a story published! my parents arent up to paying for one...now, i read on!
8/31/2003 c16 1futagoat02
heheh... that was good. very interesting, and portrayed the battle and the goodness and evilness of hearts. oh yeah... love the gods and goddesses part! like it, love it, c u later!
baibaiyukie
1futagoat02heheh... that was good. very interesting, and portrayed the battle and the goodness and evilness of hearts. oh yeah... love the gods and goddesses part! like it, love it, c u later!
baibaiyukie