for The Encore6/17/2003 c1 
124AndaM
This was really good. I enjoyed the rhyming scheme. You have such a good vocabulary! I'm jealous! Mine is extensive, but I can never pull the right words up at the times I need them. *rolls eyes* Very well written..
124AndaMThis was really good. I enjoyed the rhyming scheme. You have such a good vocabulary! I'm jealous! Mine is extensive, but I can never pull the right words up at the times I need them. *rolls eyes* Very well written..
6/15/2003 c1 teresa7
your rhyme scheme is great...your poems are so beautiful because you have an extended vocabulary...unlike so ppl *blushes*. write more...
~teresa~
your rhyme scheme is great...your poems are so beautiful because you have an extended vocabulary...unlike so ppl *blushes*. write more...
~teresa~
6/14/2003 c1 26kamikaze899
this must be my favorite in all your works so far.. keep up the good work ^^
26kamikaze899this must be my favorite in all your works so far.. keep up the good work ^^
6/13/2003 c1 14smileyamers
my favorite line - "Blind bliss belittled no more"
=) great metaphors! keep it up. nice poem!
14smileyamersmy favorite line - "Blind bliss belittled no more"
=) great metaphors! keep it up. nice poem!
6/13/2003 c1 9Finsternissan
HIYAZ i love your poem and thanx for your comments maybe i can add u to my contacks or something because i'm not that smart lolZ and all my friends don't really like poetry so tell me what you think anyways keep it up i g2g for school now
Bye
Smilely Smiley
9FinsternissanHIYAZ i love your poem and thanx for your comments maybe i can add u to my contacks or something because i'm not that smart lolZ and all my friends don't really like poetry so tell me what you think anyways keep it up i g2g for school now
Bye
Smilely Smiley
6/10/2003 c1 106cosmo-queen
I liked this , it was very well-written. I liked the line "Through dazzling orbs I peek." Good work, keep writing :)
*cosmo-queen*
106cosmo-queenI liked this , it was very well-written. I liked the line "Through dazzling orbs I peek." Good work, keep writing :)
*cosmo-queen*