for My Name is Forgotten6/17/2003 c1 
124AndaM
This is really great. Well written. I can relate to this, also. I'm on a neverending search for me. The real me. It can be a difficult thing, and believe me I've gotten lost many times along the way. Stumbling through life's broken path..
124AndaMThis is really great. Well written. I can relate to this, also. I'm on a neverending search for me. The real me. It can be a difficult thing, and believe me I've gotten lost many times along the way. Stumbling through life's broken path..
6/17/2003 c1 187Strina
I really suck at reviews, so I can't tell you exactly why I like it, but I really do.
187StrinaI really suck at reviews, so I can't tell you exactly why I like it, but I really do.
6/15/2003 c1 teresa7
this poem was well put...a lot of ppl can relate to when they don't who they are. i know i can. keep it up!^^
~teresa~
this poem was well put...a lot of ppl can relate to when they don't who they are. i know i can. keep it up!^^
~teresa~
6/13/2003 c1 14quadellic
actually Matt-that is how it is suppose to be. In simplest terms I was to explain an emotion of mine. But, I understand what you mean :)
14quadellicactually Matt-that is how it is suppose to be. In simplest terms I was to explain an emotion of mine. But, I understand what you mean :)
6/13/2003 c1 29Matt Locke
These are nice images, and the poem _looks_ especially nice by beginning most lines with I. BUT:
I would highly suggest that you figure out some way to extend some of the ideas across many lines, instead of confining them to three or four words. Many of these images are beautiful and intriguing, but it would benefit the poem, I think, if you were to elaborate upon them in some ways.
29Matt LockeThese are nice images, and the poem _looks_ especially nice by beginning most lines with I. BUT:
I would highly suggest that you figure out some way to extend some of the ideas across many lines, instead of confining them to three or four words. Many of these images are beautiful and intriguing, but it would benefit the poem, I think, if you were to elaborate upon them in some ways.
6/10/2003 c1 106cosmo-queen
This is very good, very deep and meaningful. Identity crises are very thought-provoking and confusing times. I can relate to that. Great work, keep writing :)
*cosmo-queen*
106cosmo-queenThis is very good, very deep and meaningful. Identity crises are very thought-provoking and confusing times. I can relate to that. Great work, keep writing :)
*cosmo-queen*