for My God, Why have you forsaken me!6/17/2003 c1 
124AndaM
I really enjoyed this poem. I can relate! Wandering aimlessly along life's hopeless path, I wonder if I'm all alone. Sometimes. (omg..i could SO turn that line into a poem lol :D) This was really nice, well written. I don't know if I could express myself that well..
124AndaMI really enjoyed this poem. I can relate! Wandering aimlessly along life's hopeless path, I wonder if I'm all alone. Sometimes. (omg..i could SO turn that line into a poem lol :D) This was really nice, well written. I don't know if I could express myself that well..
6/15/2003 c1 teresa7
i liked this one too. i can see through most of your poems that your religious with a lot of respect for God. you've already tried to use "I" at the beginning of each sentence for "My name is Forgotten". try to switch out of that and expand a lil...so far, you're doing an awesome job!^^
~teresa~
i liked this one too. i can see through most of your poems that your religious with a lot of respect for God. you've already tried to use "I" at the beginning of each sentence for "My name is Forgotten". try to switch out of that and expand a lil...so far, you're doing an awesome job!^^
~teresa~
6/13/2003 c1 endless040
This poem reminded me one of the nightmares I had a long time ago, great poem. I like it.
This poem reminded me one of the nightmares I had a long time ago, great poem. I like it.
6/13/2003 c1 35Jane Austen the 2nd
I completely get the feeling from the poem that you suggested in the summary! I am also religious and see your view! Great work and great emphasis on God and you in the poem
35Jane Austen the 2ndI completely get the feeling from the poem that you suggested in the summary! I am also religious and see your view! Great work and great emphasis on God and you in the poem