for Vampire Lover3/3/2004 c21 Lupa
Awsome! Write some more, please! Im too involved in the story for you to leave me hangin.
Awsome! Write some more, please! Im too involved in the story for you to leave me hangin.
2/29/2004 c21 
3Josee Poesee
Oh dude that interview was creepy! especially the coffin part *shudders* great story though!
*~* Dy *~*
3Josee PoeseeOh dude that interview was creepy! especially the coffin part *shudders* great story though!
*~* Dy *~*
2/24/2004 c21 4veralidaine sarrasri
I think you should have dante bite bliss in her sleep in the next chapter. Whatever you write, please write it fast, it is really interesting. I can't wait till the next chapter
4veralidaine sarrasriI think you should have dante bite bliss in her sleep in the next chapter. Whatever you write, please write it fast, it is really interesting. I can't wait till the next chapter
2/8/2004 c21 40Death Princess
COOL! I PERSONALLY DONT USUALLY LIKE VAMPIRE FICS BUT THIS 1 IS GREAT! its so cute! theres so many unanswered questions tho like i dunno much bout Bliss' original background and wat suddenly hppened wiv her sight? 4got the rest of the questions but hehe... ive got a short tem memory. any wayz UPDATE SOON plZ!
40Death PrincessCOOL! I PERSONALLY DONT USUALLY LIKE VAMPIRE FICS BUT THIS 1 IS GREAT! its so cute! theres so many unanswered questions tho like i dunno much bout Bliss' original background and wat suddenly hppened wiv her sight? 4got the rest of the questions but hehe... ive got a short tem memory. any wayz UPDATE SOON plZ!
1/30/2004 c21 14Glacial Rose
I enjoy the character studies, but could you please update on the story... I'm hooked on it and I really want to see what happens...
Jenners
14Glacial RoseI enjoy the character studies, but could you please update on the story... I'm hooked on it and I really want to see what happens...
Jenners
1/20/2004 c21 1Meg Schick
Please Update soon! I've been waiting patiently for the next chapter. I really love you're writing, and i crave more. Lol. Please, make it soon.
~Nemesis
1Meg SchickPlease Update soon! I've been waiting patiently for the next chapter. I really love you're writing, and i crave more. Lol. Please, make it soon.
~Nemesis
1/9/2004 c21 1Lucerito-del-alba
thanks for updating again. i think this is actually quite a useful thing for you to do! lol! and anyway im glad you came up with something anyway.
about the university pressure, well that does explain a lot. anyway, i hope the story doesnt finish too soon, i think id miss it too much!
try to update soon!
1Lucerito-del-albathanks for updating again. i think this is actually quite a useful thing for you to do! lol! and anyway im glad you came up with something anyway.
about the university pressure, well that does explain a lot. anyway, i hope the story doesnt finish too soon, i think id miss it too much!
try to update soon!
12/30/2003 c20 bloomangel
of course, i'm very sad to learn that there are no more chapters...but we all understand writer's block :) this is very interesting, the character interviews. good idea to post them. please write another chapter soon, though, i may suffer fp withdrawal again :)
of course, i'm very sad to learn that there are no more chapters...but we all understand writer's block :) this is very interesting, the character interviews. good idea to post them. please write another chapter soon, though, i may suffer fp withdrawal again :)
12/30/2003 c18 bloomangel
*squeal of delight* need i say that i LOVE this chapter? well, the title is very suitable, and your descriptions were right, frantic and spontaneous to match the circumstance. i like dante's jokes...extremely entertaining :P bliss's suspicion hadn't even occurred to me, either. you have piqued my interest :) no tips this time either...although i believe the word is spelled "permanent" not "perminent" :D
*squeal of delight* need i say that i LOVE this chapter? well, the title is very suitable, and your descriptions were right, frantic and spontaneous to match the circumstance. i like dante's jokes...extremely entertaining :P bliss's suspicion hadn't even occurred to me, either. you have piqued my interest :) no tips this time either...although i believe the word is spelled "permanent" not "perminent" :D
12/30/2003 c17 bloomangel
tips: "Part of me wanted to open my eyes, and instantly sprint away from the dusty old mansion, like a mother deer leaping off into the woods, never looking back." you don't need the first comma b/c there's not another subject for "sprint."
o, i liked this chapter! very intriguing; i like bliss's plan of action :) nice way to end it too: i was still in one piece. quite amusing...
tips: "Part of me wanted to open my eyes, and instantly sprint away from the dusty old mansion, like a mother deer leaping off into the woods, never looking back." you don't need the first comma b/c there's not another subject for "sprint."
o, i liked this chapter! very intriguing; i like bliss's plan of action :) nice way to end it too: i was still in one piece. quite amusing...
12/30/2003 c16 bloomangel
tips: "letting me know the healing of my eyes were taking place" = "healing of my eyes was" b/c it's the healing taking place, which is singular, not the eyes. here's another example dialogue: ""Not when I'm with you." His voice chided." might want to use comma, quotation, continue w/o capitalization.
i'm pleased to note that bliss herself shares some of my mistrust in dante's sudden change :)
tips: "letting me know the healing of my eyes were taking place" = "healing of my eyes was" b/c it's the healing taking place, which is singular, not the eyes. here's another example dialogue: ""Not when I'm with you." His voice chided." might want to use comma, quotation, continue w/o capitalization.
i'm pleased to note that bliss herself shares some of my mistrust in dante's sudden change :)