for Forever & Always9/30/2003 c1 
4Framage
well it was kind of short but i would say that was ok for a preface. there was a few typos but nothing too bad. im interested to see what happens in future chapters. this story shows promise! take care and good luck.
4Framagewell it was kind of short but i would say that was ok for a preface. there was a few typos but nothing too bad. im interested to see what happens in future chapters. this story shows promise! take care and good luck.
6/17/2003 c1 Snow Tears
Hey! I like it a lot! i'd like it if u'd hurry and update. PWEASE? w/ a cherry on top? i luv it!
Snow Tears
Hey! I like it a lot! i'd like it if u'd hurry and update. PWEASE? w/ a cherry on top? i luv it!
Snow Tears
6/10/2003 c1 10LPScissorhands
ah you stopped, i love vampire stories and yours sounds good already. email me when u update!
10LPScissorhandsah you stopped, i love vampire stories and yours sounds good already. email me when u update!