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10/9/2007 c1 4Iccle Fairy
very good. nice flow to keep the reader reading ...(?) duh...anyway sorry yes... wonderful descriptions, i like the second stanza best, good words! fran ~*~
5/29/2007 c1 10DarkBlysse
I like the rhyme scheme, and I have to say that the first stanza is really well written. As soon as I got to the last line of it, I wanted to read the rest of the poem in the hopes that it was as good.

Hmm, there were a few places where the rhythm was off, but that's easily fixable. I loved the parts where the rythm was dead-on-they just flowed effortlessly (1st and 3rd stanzas, particularly).

Teehee. Redrum.

Anyways, this was a really good poem. Great work!
5/18/2005 c1 9Lady Ellenor Mannake
Quite intersting your writing style...I enjoyed your poem.
12/25/2003 c1 Lucy Ricardo
Wow, this is really good. Keep it up. write more poems.

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