for I Think I'm Going Nuts10/9/2007 c1 
4Iccle Fairy
very good. nice flow to keep the reader reading ...(?) duh...anyway sorry yes... wonderful descriptions, i like the second stanza best, good words! fran ~*~
4Iccle Fairyvery good. nice flow to keep the reader reading ...(?) duh...anyway sorry yes... wonderful descriptions, i like the second stanza best, good words! fran ~*~
5/29/2007 c1 10DarkBlysse
I like the rhyme scheme, and I have to say that the first stanza is really well written. As soon as I got to the last line of it, I wanted to read the rest of the poem in the hopes that it was as good.
Hmm, there were a few places where the rhythm was off, but that's easily fixable. I loved the parts where the rythm was dead-on-they just flowed effortlessly (1st and 3rd stanzas, particularly).
Teehee. Redrum.
Anyways, this was a really good poem. Great work!
10DarkBlysseI like the rhyme scheme, and I have to say that the first stanza is really well written. As soon as I got to the last line of it, I wanted to read the rest of the poem in the hopes that it was as good.
Hmm, there were a few places where the rhythm was off, but that's easily fixable. I loved the parts where the rythm was dead-on-they just flowed effortlessly (1st and 3rd stanzas, particularly).
Teehee. Redrum.
Anyways, this was a really good poem. Great work!