6/20/2003 c1 28Kellza
EErily similar to my own thoughts... seasons and time have always gotten to me, even before.

I especially like the mention of the ice cream truck... I remember mom handing me and Jesse money last summer and us chasing down the ice cream truck, barefoot in our towels, for the kids. Every time I hear it now, which is almost every day, I remember that day.

Thanks again Sar, for reminding me you're with me.

6/11/2003 c1 39Cgonzales
Very moving piece with great images. I noticed the lack of punctuation was wondering what you were aiming for with it. All in all a good piece, keep up the good work.