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6/12/2003 c1 kobebeefcake
Well, it was indeed short. The poem itself was original and okay. But my suggestion is to, perhaps, add a bit more on to it to show more emotion. That's only a small thing, so don't worry about it. The poem was nice and fresh. However, as you have mentioned, your spelling needs help. I suggest a dictionary or Microsoft Works Word Processor Spell Checker to get around those.
6/11/2003 c1 Needa S
Beautiful..Excellent job!

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