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10/12/2003 c1 orangefreak33
Nice imagery. Forests are nice. :) I like the non-rhythm of it.
7/3/2003 c1 25Soviet
Wow.. this is awesome... good job
6/18/2003 c1 9Ice Wolf17
Awesome! Wow, this was very well-written. I like it. Although, I don't like reading poems. But hey, here's an exception. Wow... Well, Keep on writing!
6/16/2003 c1 9speal
OOer! Phwoar! Lolz omg this poem is GREAT.

*Composes self*

Really, I love the poem; all the more because I understand the whole thing, I think. Like everyone else says, keep writing. Not that you would stop, you mean lean writing machine!

*pause*

I'm sorry. Just...sorry. Anyway, 'tis a lovely work.
6/11/2003 c1 2battraven
Nice...you have very good imagery, nice use of adjectives. Keep writing, I'm not that good at critiquing (or writing) poetry. Keep it up!

- battraven
6/11/2003 c1 28tahayov
mm i love the idea of this poem.its nice but it doesnt feel complete.u still have the feeling that there is more to come from this poem even after u finish it.u know what i mean?

but its very nice..nice work:)

i was wondreing if u could read and review some of my poems plz

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