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10/20/2004 c1 do not resuscitate
oh amazing. i loved the first line, the whole thing was just beautiful though.
8/21/2003 c1 7AethraZip
*eyes tear up* That was beautiful! I can see why your teacher liked it.
6/16/2003 c1 orangefreak33
I remember this one, you have it up on your site. I think I told you that I really like it, but if I didn't, I meant to.

And battraven, don't tell her to capitalize it! The lowercase adds to the mood.
6/11/2003 c1 2battraven
I really like this one for some reason...it's very good. Keep it up, I love the mention of mythology. Also, an idea that might make it more ├Žsthetically pleasing is capitals at every line or at least at the start of the stanza. Just a thought

- battraven
6/11/2003 c1 37Animagess
Very nice imagery... I like the title, too.

Oh yeah, go to Account Settings and take the check out of the "Do not accept anonymous reviews" box.
6/11/2003 c1 33eatfoodyum
cool. "our eyes blazing with painfully human pride" i like that line. it really sums up humanity. :)

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