for Endless Other Side9/20/2008 c1 Isca
"A tune of silence and madness." I feel like that all of the time...
"Beautiful and forbidden." I can definitely relate to that, as the person I've liked for years, is 'beautiful and forbidden' :P
:) You're amazing! You have such a genuine way of connecting to the reader!
"A tune of silence and madness." I feel like that all of the time...
"Beautiful and forbidden." I can definitely relate to that, as the person I've liked for years, is 'beautiful and forbidden' :P
:) You're amazing! You have such a genuine way of connecting to the reader!
9/13/2005 c1 
298grip
i've been reading a lot of your older poems.. you used the word 'gray' a lot... anyways, i get the same feeling from this as i feel sometimes.. maybe i don't CARE for the person as much as i care for the feeling i have when i'm with somebody. good poem
298gripi've been reading a lot of your older poems.. you used the word 'gray' a lot... anyways, i get the same feeling from this as i feel sometimes.. maybe i don't CARE for the person as much as i care for the feeling i have when i'm with somebody. good poem
6/7/2005 c1 D
It has always fascinated me on how the temperature of skin can change one's mood.D.
It has always fascinated me on how the temperature of skin can change one's mood.D.
6/11/2003 c1 8VividShimmer
"Water dripped its thorny edges over me like waves to the beach,"
Beautiful.
Just remarkable.
Nice technique and idea.
Though I think that if you grouped certain lines together, it would have made the poem a lot stronger over all.
8VividShimmer"Water dripped its thorny edges over me like waves to the beach,"
Beautiful.
Just remarkable.
Nice technique and idea.
Though I think that if you grouped certain lines together, it would have made the poem a lot stronger over all.
6/11/2003 c1 2blinkie
beautiful and deep. it's very well-written. i noticed a typo though. "prey" should be "pray" ^_^
i especially liked the lines
"Blame is a word that escapes me,
I learned to play a different song,
a tune of silence, and madness."
that's powerful!
this poem was a very good read. i thoroughly enjoyed it ^_^
blinkie
2blinkiebeautiful and deep. it's very well-written. i noticed a typo though. "prey" should be "pray" ^_^
i especially liked the lines
"Blame is a word that escapes me,
I learned to play a different song,
a tune of silence, and madness."
that's powerful!
this poem was a very good read. i thoroughly enjoyed it ^_^
blinkie
6/11/2003 c1 35Jane Austen the 2nd
that had a very interesting tone and it was really deep. I enjoyed it a lot! Tell me if you think my poems are as deep!I would be honored if they even met to 1/20 of your standards!
pretty pink:)
35Jane Austen the 2ndthat had a very interesting tone and it was really deep. I enjoyed it a lot! Tell me if you think my poems are as deep!I would be honored if they even met to 1/20 of your standards!
pretty pink:)