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7IcanzIIravor
This is one of the best and greatest stories I have ever read. I am in awe.
7IcanzIIravorThis is one of the best and greatest stories I have ever read. I am in awe.
8/18/2016 c10 IcanzIIravor
Bastard! I knew Carlton would be a problem, but he is crazy. This love he thinks he has for Jacques is not love, but possessiveness and a dangerous attraction. To do this is unforgivable.
Bastard! I knew Carlton would be a problem, but he is crazy. This love he thinks he has for Jacques is not love, but possessiveness and a dangerous attraction. To do this is unforgivable.
8/18/2016 c9 IcanzIIravor
I knew it! I knew Carlton would try to take Jacquie to keep her from Jacques. Man has no shame. He is that determined to keep Jac from being with her that he would try this folly. He is definitely no friend. So glad Jacquie can see through his charms.
I knew it! I knew Carlton would try to take Jacquie to keep her from Jacques. Man has no shame. He is that determined to keep Jac from being with her that he would try this folly. He is definitely no friend. So glad Jacquie can see through his charms.
8/18/2016 c7 IcanzIIravor
This man is breaking my heart. I can well understand the title now. It is a heavy thing to be in love yet afraid to speak it out loud. My only consolation for Jacques is that at least he hasn't given into despair and become reckless. I love this story. Carlton is definitely too possessive and it was wise to finally distance himself from Carlton and grow a bit. Carlton's obsession with control will no doubt come to haunt our intrepid hero.
This man is breaking my heart. I can well understand the title now. It is a heavy thing to be in love yet afraid to speak it out loud. My only consolation for Jacques is that at least he hasn't given into despair and become reckless. I love this story. Carlton is definitely too possessive and it was wise to finally distance himself from Carlton and grow a bit. Carlton's obsession with control will no doubt come to haunt our intrepid hero.
8/17/2016 c3 IcanzIIravor
This story is amazing thus far. So mad at myself that I have only just now discovered it.
This story is amazing thus far. So mad at myself that I have only just now discovered it.
5/28/2008 c17 15BoredSinceBirth
Wow.
That's pretty much all that I can say right now x).
This story is absolutely amazing, and I was completely drawn in.
I've been reading this all day, I can't get enough of it. This has to be one of - if not THE - best Regency I've ever read. There's just the right amount of characterization combined with the whole "mysteriousness" of the plot (and Carlton. *_*) to the point where I'm just racing along the chapters having to know what's going to happen next x).
But, I noticed that you're still revising it and all that good stuff.
I like the revisions better, suddenly reading this chapter, I noticed a huge style change. Not to say it's not any good, but I just prefer your new style :).
I want to learn what happens, because I feel just as confused as Jaques having to deal with Carlton's vagueness and all the drama.
But, I guess I can't yet, until the revised version gets put up. x(.
I can't really continue if I can't connect to the style as well, because it's just a sudden switch and if up to this point it's written one way, and now all the sudden another, I couldn't get used to it. x(.
So I was wondering if you're still currently rewriting it, or if I should sate my "OMGIMUSTREADON"-ness and keep going?
It says that the last update was in '04, but I've noticed it doesn't update if all you do is change things and re-upload.
Sorry, I'm incoherent right now. It's really late...or early, depending on how you look at it.
In short, I just really, absolutely loved this story (and Carlton *_*) and I hope you continue sharing your writing :)
15BoredSinceBirthWow.
That's pretty much all that I can say right now x).
This story is absolutely amazing, and I was completely drawn in.
I've been reading this all day, I can't get enough of it. This has to be one of - if not THE - best Regency I've ever read. There's just the right amount of characterization combined with the whole "mysteriousness" of the plot (and Carlton. *_*) to the point where I'm just racing along the chapters having to know what's going to happen next x).
But, I noticed that you're still revising it and all that good stuff.
I like the revisions better, suddenly reading this chapter, I noticed a huge style change. Not to say it's not any good, but I just prefer your new style :).
I want to learn what happens, because I feel just as confused as Jaques having to deal with Carlton's vagueness and all the drama.
But, I guess I can't yet, until the revised version gets put up. x(.
I can't really continue if I can't connect to the style as well, because it's just a sudden switch and if up to this point it's written one way, and now all the sudden another, I couldn't get used to it. x(.
So I was wondering if you're still currently rewriting it, or if I should sate my "OMGIMUSTREADON"-ness and keep going?
It says that the last update was in '04, but I've noticed it doesn't update if all you do is change things and re-upload.
Sorry, I'm incoherent right now. It's really late...or early, depending on how you look at it.
In short, I just really, absolutely loved this story (and Carlton *_*) and I hope you continue sharing your writing :)
1/19/2007 c36 25V de V
What a sublimely beautiful story. I love it dearly. Everything-characters, setting, dialogue, description-is superb and very delightful to read. Why on earth are you rewriting it? But you probably have good reason, and I shall await its conclusion. But very excellent work. Brava, brava.
25V de VWhat a sublimely beautiful story. I love it dearly. Everything-characters, setting, dialogue, description-is superb and very delightful to read. Why on earth are you rewriting it? But you probably have good reason, and I shall await its conclusion. But very excellent work. Brava, brava.
4/29/2006 c36 Jelei
if only i could write a review that befits such a lovely and thoughtful story, but as i lack the words i shall leave you with...wow!
if only i could write a review that befits such a lovely and thoughtful story, but as i lack the words i shall leave you with...wow!
1/30/2006 c36 1happiness by the kilowatt
I am speechless. You write so, I don't know the word, I guess complete. This story is so full of everything. The emotion in it is incredible and I am sad that the story has finished. The completeness of the story is overwhelming. There's so much in it, not so much that it becomes hard to grasp but enough for it to be a story that has no holes in it that leaves the reader completely confused on something. I like that all your characters had a side that could be loved because even though I had little feeling for Carlton, I was terribly upset when he died. I don't really know how to get out what I want to say about 'A Coward's Wisdom' but only that it is a brilliant story and it deserves a place in bookshops. And the fact that you wrote a story with such depth when you were so young is amazing, it says a lot about you. You're definately my favourite writer on here. You write beautifully. So I thank you for writing and sharing the story of Jaques Cleon de Verie.
1happiness by the kilowattI am speechless. You write so, I don't know the word, I guess complete. This story is so full of everything. The emotion in it is incredible and I am sad that the story has finished. The completeness of the story is overwhelming. There's so much in it, not so much that it becomes hard to grasp but enough for it to be a story that has no holes in it that leaves the reader completely confused on something. I like that all your characters had a side that could be loved because even though I had little feeling for Carlton, I was terribly upset when he died. I don't really know how to get out what I want to say about 'A Coward's Wisdom' but only that it is a brilliant story and it deserves a place in bookshops. And the fact that you wrote a story with such depth when you were so young is amazing, it says a lot about you. You're definately my favourite writer on here. You write beautifully. So I thank you for writing and sharing the story of Jaques Cleon de Verie.
5/11/2004 c36 4The Babylonian Mystery
If i want to die i come and read your story. Yes, i have gone mad for what drives people mad. janell, through out the story you have shown a lot of improvement and what i see is that your story has become better and better instead of fading into nothing like other stories. Wow janell, you have workes so hard and stayed up late to truley achieve your goals which is to bring a perfect conclusion yet the end becomes the begining with way you end it. I saw good symblosim and very good describtion. Now you have to work on something else or elese i won't have anything to read no more and if iread anything i would better be wanting you to write. Just a joke. i will start reading but i reallty want you to continue your writing that brings things alive for me. OKey janell, lots of love and great work.
4The Babylonian MysteryIf i want to die i come and read your story. Yes, i have gone mad for what drives people mad. janell, through out the story you have shown a lot of improvement and what i see is that your story has become better and better instead of fading into nothing like other stories. Wow janell, you have workes so hard and stayed up late to truley achieve your goals which is to bring a perfect conclusion yet the end becomes the begining with way you end it. I saw good symblosim and very good describtion. Now you have to work on something else or elese i won't have anything to read no more and if iread anything i would better be wanting you to write. Just a joke. i will start reading but i reallty want you to continue your writing that brings things alive for me. OKey janell, lots of love and great work.
5/11/2004 c36 8poohba
Wow. That was intense.
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You really have a way of capturing Jaques despair and then, finally, his feelings of hope.
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I'm so glad this ended happily - but a realistic happy - not an "ever after."
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Michel was, once again, a wise voice in a time of trouble here. (I do love his character, and I don't think it has anything to do with "creating" him. You did most of the work on that. I think I would have liked his role in this story no matter what.)
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For a while, it seemed like Jaques was almost turning into Carlton this chapter - that he was going to be a monster to Jacqui too. I'm glad that he straightened himself out (or SHE straightened him out, or Michel did. Somebody.)
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You mentioned once wanting to publish this. I think it probably needs some revision first (as any story does.) As I was reading this chapter, I couldn't help but think - "I wonder how this story would go if it was told mainly from a third person nararator with Jaques voice just popping up from time to time in a journal entry or something." Sometimes Jaques, as a nararator, seems so detached, even from himself, that he almost is speaking in the third person. And then there are the occasional chapters NOT told from his perspective at all.
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I don't know if that's something you'd have interest in doing in a revision or not, but it's a thought.
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Anyway, woo. What a ride. I can't believe you and Faery Tragedy both finished your stories in the same week. What am I going to read now? Stay in touch, all right?
8poohbaWow. That was intense.
*
You really have a way of capturing Jaques despair and then, finally, his feelings of hope.
*
I'm so glad this ended happily - but a realistic happy - not an "ever after."
*
Michel was, once again, a wise voice in a time of trouble here. (I do love his character, and I don't think it has anything to do with "creating" him. You did most of the work on that. I think I would have liked his role in this story no matter what.)
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For a while, it seemed like Jaques was almost turning into Carlton this chapter - that he was going to be a monster to Jacqui too. I'm glad that he straightened himself out (or SHE straightened him out, or Michel did. Somebody.)
*
You mentioned once wanting to publish this. I think it probably needs some revision first (as any story does.) As I was reading this chapter, I couldn't help but think - "I wonder how this story would go if it was told mainly from a third person nararator with Jaques voice just popping up from time to time in a journal entry or something." Sometimes Jaques, as a nararator, seems so detached, even from himself, that he almost is speaking in the third person. And then there are the occasional chapters NOT told from his perspective at all.
*
I don't know if that's something you'd have interest in doing in a revision or not, but it's a thought.
*
Anyway, woo. What a ride. I can't believe you and Faery Tragedy both finished your stories in the same week. What am I going to read now? Stay in touch, all right?
5/10/2004 c36 25faery tragedy
WOW! Go you! I've been long-awaiting the conclusion of this for awhile, but absences makes the heart grow fonder! It seems like everything is wrapping up lately, season finales and end of stories, those type of things.
One of the most remarkable things I found about this chapter was how Jaques admits he loves Jacqui because he needs her, not beause he truly loves her. It's a fitting ending-bittersweet, poignant, memorable. The fight between them was typical and in-character. You write such dramatic prose. The atmosphere is wonderful, as is the ever-comforting Michel. He was always a favourite.
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The conversation between Jaques and Michel is inspiring, and relates to the theme well. For a good portion of this story (epic, really), Jaques has been solemn, sorrowful, regretful. And her comes Michel with advice that readers can relate to our own lives. And as much as I'd like to believe this all took place-I know the message came from YOUR head, so I must thank you for such a deep theme.
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All in all, you are an AMAZING writer, and I wouldn't be surprised to stroll into Border's one day and see your name on a paperback. Your piece was moving, intelligent, and dramatic. You have a gift of variety in words, depth in characters, and poetic prose. And I'd again like to mention the atmosphere-very Three Musketeer-ish. Thank you for such a wonderful read! I hope you'll start a new story soon!
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*Faery Tragedy
25faery tragedyWOW! Go you! I've been long-awaiting the conclusion of this for awhile, but absences makes the heart grow fonder! It seems like everything is wrapping up lately, season finales and end of stories, those type of things.
One of the most remarkable things I found about this chapter was how Jaques admits he loves Jacqui because he needs her, not beause he truly loves her. It's a fitting ending-bittersweet, poignant, memorable. The fight between them was typical and in-character. You write such dramatic prose. The atmosphere is wonderful, as is the ever-comforting Michel. He was always a favourite.
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The conversation between Jaques and Michel is inspiring, and relates to the theme well. For a good portion of this story (epic, really), Jaques has been solemn, sorrowful, regretful. And her comes Michel with advice that readers can relate to our own lives. And as much as I'd like to believe this all took place-I know the message came from YOUR head, so I must thank you for such a deep theme.
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All in all, you are an AMAZING writer, and I wouldn't be surprised to stroll into Border's one day and see your name on a paperback. Your piece was moving, intelligent, and dramatic. You have a gift of variety in words, depth in characters, and poetic prose. And I'd again like to mention the atmosphere-very Three Musketeer-ish. Thank you for such a wonderful read! I hope you'll start a new story soon!
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*Faery Tragedy
5/10/2004 c36 passion101
so...it's over? Sorry, i'm a bit confused, although it seems that way. If it is, I just wanna say thanks for putting so much time and devotion into this story. It truly has been an experience reading this. There were so many things that happened that it didn't even seem like the same story. And yet, you pulled it off and for that I am grateful. This story has truly been an adventure.
so...it's over? Sorry, i'm a bit confused, although it seems that way. If it is, I just wanna say thanks for putting so much time and devotion into this story. It truly has been an experience reading this. There were so many things that happened that it didn't even seem like the same story. And yet, you pulled it off and for that I am grateful. This story has truly been an adventure.
5/8/2004 c35 4The Babylonian Mystery
Well, what do you want me to say. YOU ARE MAKING ME CRAZY AHA CRAZY I TELL YOU. THis is what i feel, and face it. You know you make me hate doing my home work in study blocks because all i want is to listen to you reading this wonderfull story. This was awesome. *weeps* the way you finish this, janell...i have not read a better way (i told u to not give it to calvin to finish it)kidding*winks*.
Oh my you know how to tourture others you know. YA, my favorite part is when jaques was not releaved when he saw jaquline alive. NO for real i like the part when carlton said that the building will be on fire and then Jaques is about to leave to see jaquiline and Carlton turned and asked Jaques to stay so they die togather. *crying* what a way to end it. You, you janell make me very inspired by your story and i love it.
love you and keep that good good very very and the best work up *takes a deep breath* (the end of the scene)
4The Babylonian MysteryWell, what do you want me to say. YOU ARE MAKING ME CRAZY AHA CRAZY I TELL YOU. THis is what i feel, and face it. You know you make me hate doing my home work in study blocks because all i want is to listen to you reading this wonderfull story. This was awesome. *weeps* the way you finish this, janell...i have not read a better way (i told u to not give it to calvin to finish it)kidding*winks*.
Oh my you know how to tourture others you know. YA, my favorite part is when jaques was not releaved when he saw jaquline alive. NO for real i like the part when carlton said that the building will be on fire and then Jaques is about to leave to see jaquiline and Carlton turned and asked Jaques to stay so they die togather. *crying* what a way to end it. You, you janell make me very inspired by your story and i love it.
love you and keep that good good very very and the best work up *takes a deep breath* (the end of the scene)