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11/28/2005 c1 72StormyWings
you've expressed everything that I feel about storms. hence my name. lovely.. wish I could have written something like this.

"make me more than what I am"- that line is wonderful, as well as the ending. Amazing job.
6/17/2003 c1 24pennydeath
This is exactly the type of poem I wish I could write. Brilliant and wonderful job.
6/12/2003 c1 106cosmo-queen
I loved this, it was excellent. I loved the stanza:

"take me

free me from the bonds of my dreary life

make me like you

wild-beautiful-unafraid

and instill in me your power and glory

make me more than what I am."

That was brilliant. I can definitely relate to it. Thunderstorms are just so powerful, they really fascinate me. The last stanza was great too. Keep writing :)

*cosmo-queen*
6/11/2003 c1 37eew
~ I love this. Peaceful and calm.

Keep Writing

c. butterfly~**
6/11/2003 c1 wonky donkey
Great stuff. I love thunderstorms, this is a really nice look at the majesty of the thunderstorm. I like how you say sacrificing myself to the storm.

Cheers!
6/11/2003 c1 71Spider
Noo, tell it to come back! I lurve the storm! :(

I likes. It's sad and imageariffic.

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