for Peaceful Day6/25/2003 c1 
2blinkie
hi! i see you have a new poem. the imagery here is vivd, but the poem seems quite disjointed. for example, there seems to be a gap in between the ninth and tenth lines. what 'thoughts' are you talking about? and where did the concept of change come from? nonetheless, i loved the lines:
"but i do not pull away
as it does
could it be that even the ocean can not stand my touch?"
such introspection. keep up the god work. and thanks for accepting my reviews ^_^ that shows you're a mature writer.
blinkie
2blinkiehi! i see you have a new poem. the imagery here is vivd, but the poem seems quite disjointed. for example, there seems to be a gap in between the ninth and tenth lines. what 'thoughts' are you talking about? and where did the concept of change come from? nonetheless, i loved the lines:
"but i do not pull away
as it does
could it be that even the ocean can not stand my touch?"
such introspection. keep up the god work. and thanks for accepting my reviews ^_^ that shows you're a mature writer.
blinkie
6/17/2003 c1 Odd Little Reviewer
OO...I like this one. Continue writing, and put another poem up soon! I love your poems.
OO...I like this one. Continue writing, and put another poem up soon! I love your poems.
6/13/2003 c1 2Apartment 666
*smiles* not bad, not bad at all. First of yours I've read, but you seem good. Got2go read your others now..
2Apartment 666*smiles* not bad, not bad at all. First of yours I've read, but you seem good. Got2go read your others now..
6/12/2003 c1 35Jane Austen the 2nd
Luv the topic~and all of the poem~its really great! Please read some of my stuff and tell me your thoughts
35Jane Austen the 2ndLuv the topic~and all of the poem~its really great! Please read some of my stuff and tell me your thoughts