11/13/2003 c1 tired
I really like this one...it is very tear jerking:) and it really hits me where it counts...keep up the good work...i will read more soon.
I really like this one...it is very tear jerking:) and it really hits me where it counts...keep up the good work...i will read more soon.
6/15/2003 c1 teresa7
touching and very deep. you're really good with expressing your feelings^^ keep writing...
~teresa~
touching and very deep. you're really good with expressing your feelings^^ keep writing...
~teresa~
6/13/2003 c1 35Jane Austen the 2nd
Be careful! You have competition! Your sister is extremely talented! This poem was very bedazzeling! She should get an account on the site.. does she?
pretty pink:)
Be careful! You have competition! Your sister is extremely talented! This poem was very bedazzeling! She should get an account on the site.. does she?
pretty pink:)
6/13/2003 c1 a light in the world
wow.that was really great a lot better than some ofthe others i've read and it is how a lot oof people feel but we should always remember that Jesus hung on the cross for us tell your sister that this poem is a master piece.
wow.that was really great a lot better than some ofthe others i've read and it is how a lot oof people feel but we should always remember that Jesus hung on the cross for us tell your sister that this poem is a master piece.